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Yeah yeah, forcefully enslaving a child must be normal for you huh? You reminds me of people around me who keeps saying that it was normal for me to be mentally and physically abused when I were young :)) "It's part of disciplining, it's normal."
4.8 The concept is good (It's not that new but this concept is very rare to see.) The story development is decent. Nothing special is happening yet cause it's still new. For the World Background and Character Design, I think it's still too early to judge on that but I'm hoping to see something new but interesting. Writing Quality, I have a feeling that the author are probably using grammarly which is good. However, sometimes I feel like it's kinda hard to read(?). I think searching for the right synonyms, simplifying the sentence construction, and lessening the use of "," could help. (It might help with the word count too.)
Kinda similar to: This Group of Players are all Slimes The Boss behind the Game Gamer of the Underworld Game of the World Tree All my Disciples Suck I really want to see more of this! So I'm really thankful to see one again! I don't really have any idea for the story but what I expect to read from this is some Class Inheritance/advancements, Kingdom Building, War, World Domination(?), Other realms(?) like elf realm, demonic realm, angelic realm, demi-human realms(?) and the players on the story gonna focus more on teamplay power instead of individual prowress.
Probably the most decent among the new trials. There's some flaws in the translation but overall it's interesting. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is not bad at all for new readers.... But if you had been reading chinese novels for few years you'll find the writing annoying like... 1.) "One had to know that blah blah blah.." 2.) "If others would know about this they will die at blah blah.." 3.)"MC clicked his tongue at annoyance.... MC clicked his tongue and rejoice..." 4.) "The blah blah as if blah blah." 5.) "She's so pretty, she has a cold demeanor, glinting eyes, pretty eyebrows, sexy curves, pouty lips, a unique acne.... blah blah" It's funny how female characters always are described so detailedly while the MC's description is just... a transmigrator who failed 4 times nd were granted a cheat just because...
There were no men in this world. Imagine if it's the other way around... ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
What's with mc's brain. 💀 He wanted to hide about him being a reader but tells it to everyone. What would happen in the exam if he show his prowess? Shouldn't he lie and tell them that his class is mage so he wouldn't be underestimated? or is he a masochist?