Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnated as Poseidon (Highschool DxD AU)

your mc is cringey

I like it so far but try to make him swear less. He's going to be a noble god so him swearing like sailor is detrimental to his image. Also check proofread your grammar a bit. Other that that I like the premise!

thanks for chap , please continue

speaking of "record of Ragnarok"

Te daré el beneficio de la duda así que porfa no lo dejes medio abandonado o abandonado como los demás creadores de fanfics de reencarnando en Poséidon porfa porque ma está gustando la historia y esperó el cap con gusto

Thanks for the chapter

You say this is your first time writing but it's set up pretty well, I like it.

when he chould just find a wish to become stronger

hmm... mc said that the DxD verse is terrible and there are too many strong people.... indeed there are many strong people, but has he ever seen a purple titan snap his fingers and *boom* half the population of the universe disappeared? and has he ever seen a galaxy destroyed by just one daemon?

Don't forget Poseidon is god of sea and earthquakes, most people do.

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Hay at lest this save's medusa hopefully.

The story is hard to read at the beginning cause the MC acts like a total baby, or he is just really dumb in my opinion.

thank

what does Kronos look like

Nice chapter

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