I haven't finished them actually. Just wanted to see how everything is going

I haven't completely caught up yet but I assume I missed out on the character entry. I also hope you have been doing well

Shouldn't he be a bit more understanding ?. You have the face of the man that traumatized them. Maybe you could try to shape their personalities for the better. Being petty about being rejected and not trying to work things out slowly is just immature

Time to read the previous chapters now. I was just waiting for 219 to understand her motivation and I will no read the previous chapters. She sincerely just needs someone to lean on. No offense to Zoë, though just sounds like a really good friend with infatuation to Aisha.

Author I made my comment under rainstarlight. You have a solid way of writing in making readers feel emotional. It just needs a bit of polish

Author, it's quite amazing that you made like a character again. Just making me understand her reasons for some of her decisions. And fear is such a primal feeling that I can understand her a lot. I wish I was there just to tell her after being hurt for so long by one gender and going to another thinking it would help is not the right decisions and loneliness and seeking relationships when you're in that state is just not healthy. Speaking from own experience. I found hope in God. Honestly just want to create my character just to help her. I sound like old man talking to his daughter.

I think its one of the few that had character development.

Webnovel can be strange at times. Anyways, I will try reading at the end of the day to read my average three chapters that I can. Hopefully Chapter 219 makes me love her character again. Her telling Peter to go and leave her in the first part of the story still hits me in the feels when I think about it. Based off friendship and infatuation so I do like her. Just not it her decisions. But we shall see soon enough

Appreciate the well wishes. This story has always made me smile and I am surprised this is a first draft for your story. You never forced anything in story and although this doesn't feel preachy. At least you made showed that the world doesn't revolve around Peter and people have a life of their own. Do I agree with Aisha.No. She dropped in favourbility but she is a character that does her purpose. So I this great. I just hope that this blows up

By the way author I may not be commenting alot or reading new chapters because of exams coming up and because of Aisha and Zoë is something my beliefs doesn't support. But this is a wonderful story I will try reading it when I can. Its rough ar9und the edges but it will get better

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At least he is opening to someone. I enjoy that the grieving process isn't ove4 like a snap

Sorry if I mighy sound uncomfortable with this development. Its just my beliefs doesn't support this in a sense. I hope I don't come off in any way. I won't drop the story since I enjoyed it so much and its small reason.

Um...well

It seems incoherent at times and do understand his lack of respect for figures above him since he wasn't raised properly but really cursing a being pike that even in a state of panic. Other than the huge amount of cursing and the lack of understanding that a mother just saw her kids been eaten times before. I like the premise so lets see

Good on you Will.

Author, could you remimd who Marcella is ?

Author, you mentioned submitting a character how should we go about that or are you waiting on something

Thats sounds like standard manipulation

Thats still quite strange he is the strongest and is undoubtably the strongest so whats their prove.