Devil_Hex
I don't think people are mad at you or think that the story is ruined. their probably just disappointed that your not killing Canon characters and annoyed at the slow increase in fujin strength that still hasn't reached S rank Anyway your story is definitely the best naruto fanfic I've read, so don't feel demotivated because your league's ahead of the garbage here
I absolutely love this and have loved it since I picked it up 6 months ago, I can't understand the comments of last chapter, I thought the fight was done quite well and that it was pretty obvious why Fujin hadn't instantly won, Experience, if fujin had won easily, I feellike it would have made it seem like his training was worthless. People seem to think that the seven ninja swordsman are easy targets when they are anything but easy.
dude first let me thank you for the pleasant chapters so far. and to me by far ure the most consistent pace and development thrill with the least nonsense writer in this platform. so true that i only got 3 stones a day and on normal chapter thrill i always think u deserve atleast 2 and on the awesome chapters when i gave u 3 it still felt like it shouldve been more -bottom line, im a fan of ur pacing and writing consistency- keep up bruh! doing great favor for us here
Hey author first things first I dont really comment on this app but after hearing your rant I wanted to assure you that you have done an excellent job with writing this amazing ff you exceptionally expanded on the naruto verse and have thought out an amazing fighting style for fujin tho only small critic I could give is that the story is quite slow paced and sadly at the moment doesnt give enough love to the original side characters compared to the beginning. I was actually sad reading Miekos death and was so mad at you for killing such a likeable character which just shows what an amazing job you did with an OC. To get back to my point, you have an amazing though slow paced fanfic that expands on all the right points and if you want my opinin even though most people dont like it on this app, it would be cool for you to expand a bit more on side characters (except for hona I dont like him 😅)
I dont usually leave comments but I feel like I should show my appreciation for the story.I actually joined the military about 5 months ago since its mandatory In my country and this is one of the stories that I check on daily basis. It has really helped me knowing that there is almost quaranteed chapter waiting after each Day and this is one of the Best stories what I have read. Fight scenes, world building, jutsu explanation and power balancing are all great In the story which makes this one of my favorite fics I have read.Even though I love the story and Will continue reading it regardless, the one thing I would think needs improvement is philosophy and emotions of the MC. I understand tho that the MC doesnt have A "greater cause" like world peace since those can be very controversial.
I think you should just be clearer and review the fight at the end of the chapter. or the protagonist himself thinks that he is already superior to juzo (because he trained a lot and has a good idea how to outplay enemy in naruto world + experience) and he is just acting and it is not worth killing that character at that moment because it brings no benefit. But he hurts the enemy by cutting some part of the body and look tired and exausth (acting)
I have been here since basically the beginning. Your story frustrating in a good way. I always want more. Sure your chapters could be a little denser, but the hard work that goes into the characters, fights, and writing more than make up for this flaw. And your story as a whole is exemplary. A new reader joining the fold should be flabbergasted by the quality of the story. For those of you saying your frustrated, leave for a while and get build up some chapters. Thanks for the story, and thanks fir the chapter.
It's a good story, I like the feeling of weakness being strong and you develop it well. It's hard to come up with story ideas and string together every word or sentence, not everyone can do it well. Just ignore such people, I dislike people who make offensive comments on the author the most, it would be better if he left without leaving a trace. Cheers up for writing author-san, Thank you for the chapter!