Haha nice chapter I was allready missing some Horizon action pls tell me the next chapter gets to it meaning pla dont start a 1-5 chapter flashback

ATlA sounds awsome as a well made fanfic

Man hope you have a good recovery awsome chapter I was feeling quite down as my favorite fanfic wasnt updating anymore please continue

11/10

As allways awsome chapter

As allways aesome chapter still waiting for toph and madara to reunite

Awsome as allways sadly I am too tired to write more its allready 04:40 am in germany

Haha again awsome chapter please keep going

As allways awsome chapter but still cant wait for more dialogue between the main cast and madara

Again awsome chapter I am really hopimg for a character change in azula through her experience like she was really close to becomming a good person in the series but she went insane instead I hope that changes

Hahahhahahahhaa amazing chapter I am a bit sad about the meeting with azula would have been funnyier to make it an itachi sasuke thing line her coming in him sitting lazy on the throne but still awsome as allways and I cant wait for her to get beat up and then her reaction is it going to be dispear or love or irritation whooo knows

As allways awsome chapter pls keep going

Pleeeeeeeaase keep going man i was lefted starved last year for chapters and its sooo awsome again madara 10/10 character please just dont leave me hanging again even make a patreon if that is what is needed to keep reading imma pay

Again awsome chapter please continue to write I love it

Literally 10/10 chapter but I need more man thid ff is too awsome

Hey author first things first I dont really comment on this app but after hearing your rant I wanted to assure you that you have done an excellent job with writing this amazing ff you exceptionally expanded on the naruto verse and have thought out an amazing fighting style for fujin tho only small critic I could give is that the story is quite slow paced and sadly at the moment doesnt give enough love to the original side characters compared to the beginning. I was actually sad reading Miekos death and was so mad at you for killing such a likeable character which just shows what an amazing job you did with an OC. To get back to my point, you have an amazing though slow paced fanfic that expands on all the right points and if you want my opinin even though most people dont like it on this app, it would be cool for you to expand a bit more on side characters (except for hona I dont like him 😅)

Man you gave me hope only for it to be the same chapter from yesterday

Not bad version of naruto, very close to the canon so if that isnt your cup of tea maybe you wont like it but if it is then go right ahead and read it.

Ehehe this didnt age quite well

3,5/5 it was nice and well thought out just a bit too long in my opinion especiall when I am so hyped for interactions between the MC and tobirama