Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Devil_Hex
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One thing you don’t get enough credit for is how alive this world feels. I know your care for details is often disrespected, I honestly feel so bad for you for having to suffer people who want to impose their ideas onto your story and try to disguise it as criticism. It’s so blatant and disingenuous sometimes. I sincerely appreciate how fleshed out and authentic everything feels, the training chapters we had previously especially. But even in this chapter, of course Zetsu can’t be completely undetectable, especially when someone knows what their looking for, but naturally it can’t be that easy. An Akatsuki member would probably chuckle to themselves that Kakazu would have liked to be the one to catch such a large bounty, but unless you let us see in their head we miss that. Since even them just chuckling or laughing, especially some battle crazed lunatic like Juzo, would otherwise be seen as just another sign of their bloodlust, and in addition to the killing intent a simple laugh would just be corny. And if you leave it out, they just seem so robotic, which could work for other more stoic and reserved Akatsuki members, but not for this guy. Your well executed focus on the characters sets this story really far apart from most other Naruto stories, e.g. Fujin‘s relationship with Hiruzen is expansive and dynamic, but only because Hiruzen feels like a genuine character and not just a contrived caricature of an author‘s view on government figures. I could give more examples but I really just want to say, I appreciate your writing and care for the characters immensely.
Throughout the story we didn't know how the storywill progres in next 20 chaps. There is no clear vision future events. will he become a jonin teacher , or start an organisation , would he conduct research , his plans about konoha crush , his approach towards the different clans and their heirs.we have no information about to reach 400 chapters with only missions
