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This is one of the only few gripes I have with this fic, It makes it seem like Fujin is master manipulator. Like he Sosuke Aizen or somethin. It degrades what the intelligence of the naruto characters but it understandable because no one has perfect interpretation of how naruto characters would act in the situation their placed in except Kishimoto.
Must be a typo she the deciple of Orochimaru
I hope the MC wont be relaint on the ten shadows technique, I want to actually used justsu, taijusty, genjutsu, and other naruto related weapons. I dont want the mc to fall into the category of just using the gift he was given and that all. What I see for the MC is that he'll be mainly taijutsu shinobi to save chakra and uses his ten shadows akin to jutsus.
In summary this pretty good, I would recommend this to you if on the fence on whether to read it or not. The only few pet peeves I have with the mc is his habit putting all the responsibility onto himself when even though he has no realistic way of solving the big disaster event in Naruto. But the author counter acts this with the awareness of shikimaru and choji of the mc tendancy. Take my review with a grain of salt because currently I'm typing this review when I'm on the 12th chapter of this fanfic.
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My review of the Naruto: the outsider's resolve Writing Quality : A few grammars mistake in every other chapter. 4/5 Stability of update is fantastic. 5/5 Story development: I got around the mid 30's chapters. My honest review is that it slow... Like really slow. I like how the author delved deep into in the mc feeling, thoughts, and psychology but it taking to much space. I mean started jumping ahead saw that in currently chaps 170s he still a Genin. I at least expected him to be chunin by then but he wasn't. 3/5 Character Design is ok, not much to it. 3/5 World Background is great, each chapter goes in detail of the world. 4/5