Comments of chapter undefined of My World Traveling System: The Harbinger of Death

oh man I was waiting for this. Hes in japan so obviously he's got to get bullied and abused by girls and be beta right?

Nah don't forgive am wipe out the vampires and werewolf kill them all

I don't really like people who would resort to violence just because of their suspicion but oh well, just hope that if this girl confessed to mc, mc would reject her ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ or atleast slap her face hihe.

Nah don't forgive am wipe out the vampires and werewolf kill them all

quite annoying when the mc is built on lies but ok

bro i really didnt expect it. i thought this novel will be free of otherworldly problems but yeah now it is...

Nope, that it, although you have some interesting plot and world, but with how you force this story (and badly written grammar and other part that most reader have point out so far), I don't think I will continue this, sorry but going to send my time in novel that worth reading more (I did see your other story, maybe they are better, but those similar setting I already read a lot in the past 4 year so get saturated already =.=!). If you want to know what quality novel I read then here are a list of them so you have the idea (after all early chapter are basically the face of your entire novel, if you done it badly then not much reader willing to continue as much there), some novel are in other site, too: ----------- + Lord of Mysteries; 48 Hours a Day; My Senior Brother is Too Steady'; Beware Of Chicken (from this point it at royalroad); A Journey of Black and Red; Necrotourists; Exterminator Dungeon; Threadbare; Magnus; The Voyager: Remastered; Enlightened Empire. --------------------- That some example there, then there are also a game with great story telling like 'Library of ruina', too (Bonus: check on youtube this 'library of ruina Roland' and listen to the one with 'red castle' thumbnail)

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the Chapter!

Thanks for the chapter. It's finally getting interesting outside of his phone

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Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

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