Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

I feel like Ivy is a representation of the big flaw with this story. The writer attempts to deviate so far from the storyline that at this point there is no visible conclusion in sight. Let's be honest, Ivy is a very boring character who brings absolutely nothing to the story apart from unnecessary tension. Personally, I would have preferred her character to either not exist or to actually be a character and have a personality, or be anything different. She ruined the relationship between Daphne and Quinn and is ruining daphnes character too. Ivy is an example of the writer trying to write in his own ideas and create a masterpiece yet compromising this huge plan by making the characters feel bland and 2 dimensional. I can't even figure out Quinn's character now and the other likeable characters like Eddie are out of the story currently. It is just disappointing really how in his attempt to improve the story the author has sabotaged it.

Ron be like: god is that you?

Don't take all the comments to heart. To be honest, I am quite enjoying the extra Ivy factor in the story, and its making things interesting. Keep it up.

ron be like "teach me your way oh master quinn. teach me good"

I am (forced to be) ok with him being with ivy and all but don't leave daphnee out man, it doesn't feel right. Idk but this breakdown of his should have happened with daph.

I love it!!!!!!

This is so goood!!!

best chapter

bummer

Loved this chapter.. For the last few chapters i had a feeling that they would break up.. But they made up so happy... Best HP fanfic

What is the point of Daphne beign a girlfriend if she has no screen time? Harem sucks in novels and this is another proof, it only takes away from the story

Oof, cockblocked

Thks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter