Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Well, I suppose I will stop this story here. The sin arc was already starting to tire me. Betraying Daphne (sins or not) and beginning a relationship with Ivy (who I think is an unlikable character) was the last straw.

This is like season 8 of game of throne 2.0 from a very good hp fanfiction to a harem with an mc that is all the time under the control of others. What to say i'm really disapponted i have to drop . How to ruin a beautiful work....

Translated author.... I think it would be better that at the end of the situation of the sins Quinn tells Daphne and Ivy about his strange behavior to them and how he got to that situation... (so they conclude that the sins they originate from him that means he feels something for them and with that you form a way for the relationship between them to develop more) so you also clarify things with Daphne and the mc tells her about the cursed vaults since Ivy has an idea overview of what they are

alas the ship will sail back and forth between the two 😂😂😂. ggwp author

Despite knowing everything that would happend he's letting severus die, and now this is turning into harem, good thing this novel is ending

For all those who hated this ending.. you know it was hinted when his future self talked about his son’s eye color right.. but I thought it was just ivy

just no

YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!! P.S have a good day author

I applaud you for the magnificent build up. I really enjoy your work as an author, this is the second book that I am reading from you and it makes me glad I found your works. Thanks for the chapter.

Direspectful and disappointing but still thank you You should have TAG it if you wanted to make a harem story, you putted a romance tag not a harem tag. Seriously this is just so disrespectful to your reader to do this so late in the novel and make us waste so much time. This was a great story that absolutely didn’t need this. If you had disclaimed it in the description or in the tag no one would have ever complained, even if I really despise harem to it’s core value even i must say it was written and bringed way better than others trash harem novel. In the End thank you for everything Author, it was and still is a good novel

Well at least the Sin arc is about to run its course. I honestly didn't mind the inclusion of the harem tag but Ivy really could have done with so much more relationship development first. It kinda felt like ginny from the original, just in the background, periphally involved in some escapades but nothing substantial. The Sins were.... Interesting and certainly a relatively unique element to the HP world/plot. Definitely overstayed its welcome though. No real threat to the overall development too. Bit boring since it never really showcased Quinn's intelligence in solving the issue. Still, all in all this is one of the more superior FF and I'm a little sad the ending is planned for the cannon ending timeline. Hopefully we get more than a handful of epilogues.

You have my full support author, it is your story and I will be happy to read it, the only thing I will not accept is if they NTR the protagonist, otherwise I will continue to support your decisions. Great work, waiting for next chapters.

hope it's not harem

Thanks for the chapter but...

No harem, asco de trama con lo bien que iba

you did it I love it!

great chapter. author you should prepare for the no harem babies crying. personally I don't care which route it is so long as it's done well and you have done a good job

YESSSSS HAREMMMMMM!?!?!?

Just why? He barely has time for himself and now he wants two strong-willed chicks in his life?