Thank you for the chapter love the story so far.

Nice chap ter

Another good chapter I realy like this story.

An interesting story so far while things are slow going there are obvious hints to larger things. Although there isn’t much to read about him yet the main character is well written. Overall a sound story so far with a lot of potential I’m looking forward to reading more of this. Hope this is helpful have a good day.

Haven’t read yet but I’m already glad your back. Nice to hear from you and I hope life is treating you well.

Another great overlord fanfic created by these two. I was a little hesitant at first with the story focusing on a different supreme being instead of Ainz, but the warrior definitely fits the world a lot better and is written quite well. As always with these writer the writing itself is high quaity and easy to understand. I’m not sure where the story is going but I’m sure it will be great. A good choice for fans of overlord and a well written story Im looking forward to reading.

Thank you for the well written chapter. Im really enjoying the story as well as your other works. Looking forward to your new story, have a good day and good luck with your writing.

Enjoyed the chapter and liked the suit,

Enjoy it

I have no idea what’s happening but I think I enj it oy

Thank you for the update loving the story!

Enjoying the pace

Please tell us something. It’s okay to drop the story just let us know how you are we are worried.

Nice chap ter

Enjoying the sto ry

Ugggh it’s so good but gets uploaded past midnight for me. The cliffhangers are so agonizing. Curse you for making such an extraordinary story you glorious b-stard.

Love the chaper!

Thank you for the chapters looking forward to your future work. Have a good day.

At the time of writing this there are only ten chapters, so far it is fairly interesting. Although it doesn’t have any particularly compelling qualities it is generally good. The author doesn’t seem particularly experienced but does have a lot of potential. I enjoy the focus on development of the town and I hope to see it remain a central component instead of a background development. While the characters do seem a little flat there is still some depth I hope to be explored.

Thanks for the update