Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

You're making this hard, I'm trying to focus on other things, but with every chapter released, you're teasing me to write another HP fic... tough life that is mine. Anyway, the story is incredible, never really commented before, but seeing the harsh comments lately, I would like to say that I like pretty much everything I've read in recent chapters, including the 'critical' parts, such as mind control and everything. Great job.

as i previously mentioned its not the sin vault in itself thats bad but the side storys that just make no sense in the wider context of this fanfic. 1) quin is known to try limit inefficiency and enjoys his freedom so getting rid of the toad (umbrage) should have been a main priority. 2) quin is known to hate manipulating the innocent and has a dislike for being controlled of which future quin does both of. 3)quin dosnt want his family being harmed by his actions yet still went back into the sin vault with next to no idea of how to remove it in which is a contradiction. its just things that make no sense for quin to do based on his personality that reduce emersion in the story and therfore make people that genuinely care for and enjoy the story annoyed. I enjoy this story and belive in total it is a great thought out and emersive story, but its just these contradictions that hold it back now and again.

If you do decide to end AMJ after then ending you should add bonus scenes. These scenes will just give us a better idea of his life after cannon and random storylines that can pull different emotions. Alan's death could be a bonus story, a laboratory accident that has some humor, Quinn finding the path to longevity, and maybe even his death if he chooses not to purse longevity. These stories will be really fulfilling, and can end questions readers have.

I just dont like the idea that The mc was supposed to be so smart and wise, but makes the exact same mistake twice. kinda feels like he never learnt anything from the first time he entered the sin vault

Thanks for the Chapter!👍👍👍👍👍 For me when you introduce the sin vault, I felt that you dragged too much the arc. Now with this arc I think that fix that mistake up and for me it’s not dragged, and I was enjoying even. But, when he went to America and even in the last chapter, those couple of chapters felt boring, and confusing because it felt for me that these chapters were important, but it felt like filler. And for me I like filler but when you put chapters that I notice that are important but for me is feeling like filler, than in my opinion I feel that you lost motivation, or that you lost the drive to this novel. That’s why I wrote a comment last chapter that after the war it’s better to just do a timeskip and end it. Now, this chapter again got me interested so let’s hope for me the flair is back.

Haters of this Novel:

for [1] kill an Important Charakter so he looks different on things becase he could have Prevented it if he took and more hands on Aproach instead of wait and see. - Force him to Reveal his Powers to rock the Boat . - Daphnes Cunning and Pureblood Education to contradict what quinn believes to be "better" "right" , and that you push in the Romance guilt way to quinn cant keep her in the Dark. (its sad that Daphne get no screen time now as his Girlfriend)

Also, I find it silly people making such a hit on Quinn's morals/personality. I find it silly because it is normal for people to have thoughts of what they would do but what they would actually do is different. I also find it silly that they expect a character to experience "perfect" growth. In the end, Quinn is human. He will do actions based on what he believes is important. In case of the older him, it makes sense as it included his son, and in that case I would expect him to break his normal routine. Random rant 😅

Maybe a Game of Thrones Fanfic when AMJ is finished and you had a break?

Thanks for the story I'm so invested in this that I was a little sad to hear it's ending at Canon but I'm glad you are ending it rather than keeping on just to keep on...looking forward to what you do next!

are you going to continue knb after this story or are you thinking about writing a new book

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Thx for the chapter author XD XD

try to get sin quin to be more likeable but not quin not the junkie and bratty rich kid

I think that personality changes / personality manipulation storylines are stressful and unentertaining so if i was writing a story i obviously wouldn’t do one, but i have to say the author has taken that storyline and written it, twice, while being as entertaining as is possible from that sort of storyline. It is still very stressful… but obviously it isnt bad enough to keep millions of people from reading their work. Thank you, author, for writing this fic.

I thank you for the chapter.

I think future Quinn is the sin Quinn and is ensuring his own life.

Well theres always the option to take a break and come back.

ahh, come on Quinn, you smarter than this, also thx for chap, looking forward to next one...

Thanks for the chapter