Just here to enjoy some novel
Hmm. We don’t know the standards of this world yet. So although in our society, this is definitely super primitive , once this was common place, even for us. Feel bad for the girl tho, wonder if there is any more ‘logical’ reasons for letting ‘em. Not emotional reasons.
This novel in one word, stable. The writing quality has been are throughout the entire 700 odd chapters thus far. Being detailed where it needs to be. This novel excels in word choice and more. Updating stability deserves a 5/5. Its stable. Nothing more needs to be said. Story development. This is for those who don’t want a quick story. It is slow, but each chapter builds upon something. It sets up brilliant foundations although the end goal is still elusive, if there is one, it does well with general building. Character Design. Though there is a lot of them, which does cause issues with developing so many Lifesketcher does a great job. Slowly giving each character in this story something that makes them unique. World background: In my opinion, this is what the author excels the most at. A lot of thought has gone into how this Universe/realms etc works. Although this might be a bit too much for some. Overall this is one of the better novels I’ve read on this platform. Although it will not be everyone’s cup of tea, for those who enjoy this type of novel, the author does honor to it. - :)
I don’t have much to say at the moment. Will be updating this at chapter 50. It is quite a nice novel this far. It could use someone peer reading and helping fix minor mistakes, but otherwise its got potential. A major recommendation is to put a ranking system. Though this might not work depending on how the systems align across planets. If you do put recommend a spoiler at the top of said info page. :)
Most likely ability points
5/10000 or 1/2000. Wonder how common dungeons are in general then.
High praise . Good grammar so far. Hope this meets expectations.
Yea. Only reading for fast passes…
Hmm, odd idea but maybe he can absorb life from things? (Doubtful) but it’d be an interesting twist. Though again doubtful cause what might he have absorbed in the water.
Ghost targets family, right? Maybe they family. Doubtful thou gh
The same he has with fors
Hmm, freebies. I suppose they count as that.
Kill -> killed
Town -> tone