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Despair51225dReplied to EkronenFor a sword? Tbh I saw this a lot in a novel called I’ll surpass the mc. It is pretty common it seems.
< Empyrean Great Sword >- Despair51226dCommented
Hmm, poor grandpa got a bad rep, I don’t think he deserves it tho );
With this, the Patriarch of the Leventis Clan closed his eyes, and let his senses expand towards the Everlasting Villa, where two little pests had wormed their way inside the residence. - Despair51227dCommentedCh 1 Prologue
- Despair51229dCommented
These are some stellar descriptions. 💼
Its twisted limbs seemed indomitable, each step resonating like a funeral toll. Its glowing eyes, filled with madness and rage, pierced her, tearing at her fragile soul. - Despair5121mthCommented
Tbh if it was a realistic story, this should’ve always been seen as a possibility. If they couldn’t deal with the sad death, then they simply didn’t understand the novel from the beginning…
"Got it!" He grinned excitedly as he began to type a short, but nasty review, "Your mother must have been a female dog to birth a fatherless son like you. If that ending was the best you got, be hit by a truck and Isekai yourself. Even I can write a better story than yours and I'm not even literate, lol." - Despair5121mthCommented
Hmm. Distasteful
'Damn it, the feeling of being controlled is not good in the slightest, especially when you are controlled by an ugly monster, not by a pretty woman! Just how is he controlling me?' - Despair5121mthCommented
Huh. I am loving the concept this far.
Aether Affinity (Racial) - Ability to gather, store and convert Aether - Despair5121mthCommented
Hmm. We don’t know the standards of this world yet. So although in our society, this is definitely super primitive , once this was common place, even for us. Feel bad for the girl tho, wonder if there is any more ‘logical’ reasons for letting ‘em. Not emotional reasons.
"They're just hot-blooded young lads." Garm reasoned. "Let them have their fun." - Despair5122mthCommentedCh 865 Retribution came wearing slippers
- Despair5123mthCommentedCh 796 Talaiya
- Despair5124mthCommentedCh 777 Pool
- Despair5124mthPosted
This novel in one word, stable. The writing quality has been are throughout the entire 700 odd chapters thus far. Being detailed where it needs to be. This novel excels in word choice and more. Updating stability deserves a 5/5. Its stable. Nothing more needs to be said. Story development. This is for those who don’t want a quick story. It is slow, but each chapter builds upon something. It sets up brilliant foundations although the end goal is still elusive, if there is one, it does well with general building. Character Design. Though there is a lot of them, which does cause issues with developing so many Lifesketcher does a great job. Slowly giving each character in this story something that makes them unique. World background: In my opinion, this is what the author excels the most at. A lot of thought has gone into how this Universe/realms etc works. Although this might be a bit too much for some. Overall this is one of the better novels I’ve read on this platform. Although it will not be everyone’s cup of tea, for those who enjoy this type of novel, the author does honor to it. - :)
- Despair5124mthPosted
I don’t have much to say at the moment. Will be updating this at chapter 50. It is quite a nice novel this far. It could use someone peer reading and helping fix minor mistakes, but otherwise its got potential. A major recommendation is to put a ranking system. Though this might not work depending on how the systems align across planets. If you do put recommend a spoiler at the top of said info page. :)
- Despair5124mthReplied to kill_zone58
Most likely ability points
[AP: 50] - Despair5124mthCommented
5/10000 or 1/2000. Wonder how common dungeons are in general then.
Enchanted gears were extremely rare, with a drop rate of about 0.005%! It goes without saying they were highly valued by both the government as well as the private guilds, you could ask for any absurd price, and they would happily pay it like a bunch of kids who had more money than they could count. Most of these dungeons didn't have a dungeon boss, but the few which did were deadly, and everyone knew that. - Despair5125mthReplied to Potent_Venom
High praise . Good grammar so far. Hope this meets expectations.
Memories of the dream began to flow in his mind. In his last moments, his mind replayed the scenes of his life, a series of choices and regrets. He saw himself as a young boy, full of dreams and ambition to become a pro boxer, but he listened to others who advised him differently. He ended up trapped in a corporate job, losing touch with his true passion. - Despair5126mthReplied to damfn
Yea. Only reading for fast passes…
"You're so stupid, what's the point of having you!" Vincent grumbled while closing his eyes to focus on recovering his physical strength. In a short while, he fell asleep again.After waking up again, two or three hours had already passed. He slowly got out of bed, struggling to move his sore body. - Despair5127mthCommentedCh 99 Lassadol The White (2)