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Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Rafael_Sevillano
Rafael_SevillanoLv13Rafael_Sevillano

good

Great_maid_Oni
Great_maid_OniLv4Great_maid_Oni

honestly I'm looking forward to the next arc, curious to develop the plot with this cursed curse that has already annoyed most readers kkkk Being honest again, I'd like to see a little more of his romantic development, just said he started dating and a few scenes together, nothing more, come on we need some date and family parties for everyone to be uncomfortable kkkk Thx for the chapter

DailyRaven
DailyRavenLv4DailyRaven

may Ivy not be in the next arc may Ivy not be in the next arc may Ivy not be in the next arc may Ivy not be in the next arc may Ivy not be in the next arc

Sandford_96
Sandford_96Lv5Sandford_96

This arc is just getting boring now same as when he was doing the final vault youve dragged it out for too long.

123r97
123r97Lv1123r97

The mc isn't exactly sound of mind at least I hope he's not normally this dull. It seems like every time his pride is poked he goes off and does something stupid. He's acting all prideful still despite that being the exact thing that leads to him cursing himself again like an idiot. I don't really see why he thinks he should wait besides for the sake of plot convenience to make it more dramatic. Soul stuff is serious and he's treating it as an inconvenience like he's already won when he's squared up against it multiple times now and each time he only squeaked by because of plot armor.

Hero_j
Hero_jLv13Hero_j

thanks you kind Sir for the chapter

Garcane
GarcaneLv14Garcane

Thank you for the chapter ~!

Lightning_Lord
Lightning_LordLv2Lightning_Lord

I love teacher Alan💕💕

CassTheEevee
CassTheEeveeLv14CassTheEevee

i got some build up of chapters going so i could binge, and it looks like the whole sins arc is done, but im only counting 6 of the 7 sins, am i just being blind like normal or is there a sin you haven't dealt with yet

asdasdssf
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SHouldn't mc do this while he is in the school? Sin room is in Hogwarts, and he probably needs to go there fer research after he has overcome the curse. Feels like the issue is stretched out for no reason, and even Alan says he should do it as soon as possible.

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

Jose_matos
Jose_matosLv3Jose_matos

After you get over the world of hp you should make him travel the multiverse

Magoth
MagothLv1Magoth

The distortion in space at the end reminded me of the mirror dimension. I wonder of he could create something like that.

Steelzero
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Noobamstard
NoobamstardLv13Noobamstard

thx

Dical
DicalLv11Dical

Thanks for the chapter

DaoistQzgZDh
DaoistQzgZDhLv1DaoistQzgZDh

Boring

GodOfEmpire
GodOfEmpireLv5GodOfEmpire

hello i just have a question. what if qiunn combine diagnosis, tracing and magic echolocation and then explore the world can he create a world in his mind🤔🤔🤔

FAMHDTVPNG
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thanks for the chapter

BJ1869
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thanks for the chapter