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Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Surfing_Cipher
Surfing_CipherLv1Surfing_Cipher

He reminded me TFS young trunks when he was trained by future gohan in the memories of Mr.piccolo which is he should have DOGE OR FLY UP

Opmonkey747
Opmonkey747Lv4Opmonkey747

can you do a mass release. and can you make him interact with the potters more? don't make him focused only on the vaults with no interaction with anyone besides his family.

DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14DaoistyQNGiX

Cameback and still skipping everything that has to do with these vaults. Not a fan. My opinion they are pointless and dumb so I skip them. If the story makes zero sense because i skipped then oh well still think its dumb

HadesChampion
HadesChampionLv4HadesChampion

love this book and mcs personality , but I'm kinda meh about the vaults, I know your trying to add your own to this and the effects of the vault on him are cool but I'm kinda meh on the whole riddle and puzzle thing such as all the chapters on trying to get it this current vault were not for me , I kinda like his interactions with others such as the slithering girls and the potter group

OllieZ
OllieZLv6OllieZ

With all these happenings I hope he can improve his "water-mode" by making him amphibious, he's now changing constantly between his base-mode and his water-mode. Then make protections for unwanted teleportations and artifacts-fusing with his body.

Dark_Wiz
Dark_WizLv4Dark_Wiz

I know that the concept of vaults is actually present but I think u can change end rewards for MC so he gets something useful. (hmm maybe I read too many cultivation novels where MC becomes strong with every event no Matter how small so sorry if I am being biased 🤣😂)

Michael_Scotts
Michael_ScottsLv4Michael_Scotts

What's with him and needlessly potentially taking risks? Didnt he just use a bunch of magic twice in a row against the Kraken and now hes jumping in without plopping down and resting first? No need to boost the danger level needlessly. So the question will be will he make his own portkey in case that truly was Jo's only way out outside of success?

MagicSand
MagicSandLv6MagicSand

Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

TheDeathlyPrince
TheDeathlyPrinceLv13TheDeathlyPrince

I love the Vaults and how Quinn loves magic

mickro
mickroLv14mickro

Why does he never have any sort of defense up when he goes into these places a minimum of a shield spell at least. It confuses me as this character is supposed to be smart but takes all challenges naked of all defensive options and just seems to be relying on luck to survive the first encounter and build a response after not dieing the first time around....

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

LazyAdept
LazyAdeptLv7LazyAdept

Thanks for the chapter

AvidReader962
AvidReader962Lv14AvidReader962

Awesome chapter, thanks

GawS
GawSLv5GawS

Thanks for the chapter author 👍👍

Everton_Vale_0216
Everton_Vale_0216Lv3Everton_Vale_0216

A master piece

Khaaos
KhaaosLv4Khaaos

Thanks for the chapter

Maevis_zero
Maevis_zeroLv3Maevis_zero

Thank you for the chap author-san

Ley
LeyLv10Ley

🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤

Tibbles
TibblesLv15Tibbles

Clearly he is a glutton for punishment because of how he improves.

Fan_Jl
Fan_JlLv2Fan_Jl

thanks for the chapter