Story is okay, the premise kinda makes me feel that the protagonist deserved being dumped dude couldn't hold a job lives with his mother how in the world does he think its acceptable for his girlfriend to put up with him lol.

The most frustratingly written story I have read the author tried to be mysterious and write in a new way but it just makes the whole story overly complicated without adding anything to the plot itself the constant changes in branching story lines with no real plot direction. The premis I surmise is to explain the the prelude and world building as the MC plays a phone game he downloaded building his character he will become later int he story by clearing the game but the narration is confusing and their is no breaks or direction in the story like of each chapter he will constantly change the viewpoint of the story between different story without explanation and with so many different branching plots without an amazing memory their is no way to follow. At this point I wonder if the plot of the story ever really does properly complete or we just accept it when the author himself mentions the completion via the game system. So in conclusion good premise terrible execution if their are people who actually enjoyed this hats off to you but I see no enjoyment in this torture of a story.

I find this writing style very frustrating to read...

He can't use any of that knowledge for a long time openly or he will be attacked by the government like for real this dude is dumb.

He is getting ahead of his capabilities with purchasing those tech and knowledge he needs to build himself an environment that can protect himself but so far he has no solid plan for the future dude needs security detail, an actual tech company and start building a background to cover himself but he is just like a child.

I get the feeling the MC after gaining the system only cares about getting stuff handed to him by the system and playing with his superpower he worked out only to get missions and after seeing large gains in stats but once he stopped seeing instant gains he quit. So is that one of his character traits super lazy bum?

Why was his first thought that others have superpowers seems really stupid is this guy seriously uneducated and your trying to play on his naivety? Because the Gene Serum is the easy answer to his super powers, unless you plan for this story to be one of those conspiracy were the government hides all the cool stuff.

The thing that always causes a big plot hole in these stories is the fact that if he succeeded in his scheme of ruining the company reputation and loosing money like crazy no one would work at his company he wouldn't be able to hire any employees and would never be able to find partners or buy IP he would be blacklisted from the entertainment industry if all his schemes worked plus the system would stall never upgrading and most likely it would close is the whole premise of this story about human greed for short term profit disregarding the future?

I only feel that this trope needs a turning point as if you stay on the path of only every trying to loose money it will begin to become stale as the whole story will be him always trying to loose money and failing every time your only new thing is his different ways of failure but it starts to become expected there is no surprise anymore. Add in a few times were he really succeeds or he finds other ways to pay himself like he gave up the rent like an idiot as he put himself in a deeper hole just pay her more to cover her rent then she pays him out of that money.

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Cyberpunk 2077, and or The Legendary Mechanic world would be a S-Rank Game Seed world in my opinion.

I think Prototype would be a higher rank game than E Rank world seed could handle. I would say its a good game for B-Rank for higher.

How is she commendable she only held onto the baby as a form of mental support to keep moving on she was just walking the line of bringing the child to death with her and in now way was she commendable she just gave up and was dragging everything in her life down with her.

Why does he never have any sort of defense up when he goes into these places a minimum of a shield spell at least. It confuses me as this character is supposed to be smart but takes all challenges naked of all defensive options and just seems to be relying on luck to survive the first encounter and build a response after not dieing the first time around....

Umm, he calls the original body a boy but he acts like a child himself??

The worst part about this situation is if he just goes home after this and lays down and doesn't even attempt to get acclimated. Being a failure is okay being a failure with no motivation to improve is absolutely garbage.

I wonder if the reason for the swirl mark from the Uzumaki on the back is because they know they turned their backs on them.

to many parameters to keep track of and all the mixed types is making the story convoluted and overly complex when the number of pokemon gets larger it will be very hard to keep track.

clean up the racism a bit and this story would be great