Comments of chapter undefined of Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Thanks for the chapter, cant wait to see how hes gonna help her train and brake trough :)

Pleasantly surprised she didn't ask him to go straight back to her clan, and instead we have the 6 months period for them to at least become more acquainted before him saving her entire clan. This makes much more sense.

eh. she should definitely tell her dad. they live in bright sun city. it'd be ironic if they actually have the herb needed but there was a generation break and it just needs to be found.

wow it took 12 chapters to wrap-up a single day it's quite slow, but I like it.

Shii this is addicting i need more!!

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nice chapter

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Thanks for the chapter!

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thanks for the chapter 💖

Just what I was looking for.

moreeeeeeeee

Really enjoyable story. Added to my library and if this updates often ill give some power stones cause this book really deserves it. Hope you don't drop it, keep it up!

since we've seen a little of the story by now I'd say you're doing decently well but reducing the number of clichés used would make this book more enjoyable. I understand that clichés make it easier to explain things and set up action but it makes everything feel cheap and predictable. judging by the characters of the figures we've seen so far, they seem well done, I'd think you shouldn't need to use so many clichés, the skills seem to be there, if you use them because you like them that's your choice but I think the truly good story don't need them.

Thanks for the chapter

Thx for the chapzer

Thank you for the chapter!