is an interesting book, but it could use some editing. 😃 [img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=fp][img=coins][img=update][img=recommend]

what will be his second subclass I wonder.

so our boi made it safely

so arrogant rider is playing the gurrela strategy

lots of info

I like this pace.

well let's see how it goes.

thanks f the chapter

nope, timing is great, you are implying that it's a big World ought there and our mc is not that op yet, treating him a little more nicely would be good but he's undercover in enemy territory so I understand.

yep I do, it's kinda therapeutic.

it was good though, you should have added some more characteristics to your side-characters it'll as a bit more flavor to the story and make them unique.

that was humorous, thanks this the chapter BTW.

sorry about your grandfather dude

so they have elevators

did anybody else imagined Qing yi as a little growling 🐈

World building

wow it took 12 chapters to wrap-up a single day it's quite slow, but I like it.

noice reward

hmm, so the sect master assumed that he took Qing to in as a gunnie 🐖

that was a slightly fun twist at the end, though it could've used a little more emotion