Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: Bloody star

Yeah this chapter wasnt the best... needs an editor or what the other comment says about grammarly

What is the name of Akuma no Mi by MC?

thanks for the chapter though the grammar in this one is quite off maybe try the free version of Garmmarly and see it that helps or find someone that will edit for you

Still waiting on MC’s DF name because the 2 next stages of power arent actually forthcoming to conclude the name of the DF... thx author

Fix your grammar bro. Your lowering my Iq.

can't understand at all

thanks for the chapter

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Man, it would be nice to see story with something like Goro Goro no Mi, maybe without the curse, but no system and all that jazz. This kind kind of over op is becoming really boring. That way even if mc was really skilled at at haki making them pretty damn op, it wouldn't be to ridiculous level and totally breaking the game. This kind of system almost makes it redundant to even read then fiction. System can be used to give an edge, but more often than not it's pretty much just dishing out powers and breaking the "rules" of the universe all the time.

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter