ranmaro
Confusing
First chapter, what im seeing which may turn most readers away is the large number of run ons(inappopriate placement of full stops and commas)
thoroughly confused right now
I'm so confused right now ....what's happening ...
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good chapter so far
Exp
hey author chapter 1 is confusing like a lot
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Keep it up Mr author
Thanks for the chap