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I knew I recognized this novel as something I’ve read in the past. Can literally find this on NovelUpdates- Dragon Blood Warrior. 11 volumes translated, with 16 in total. This isn’t your work.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Have no particular dislike for your novel. It’s simply on hold for me as of now as there aren’t many chapters to read, along with it’s somewhat slower pace. If there’s a single thing I’m not particularly a fan of, it’d be how the MC is stated to be an existence to be wary of(OP) and what not, but even up to where I’ve read we readers still have no clear understanding of his strength or standing. I saw you reply to another that you don’t want to bombard us with info-dumps, but there are too many things which are unclear to us and may come off as being overly-mysterious which can be a bit frustrating to read after a period of time in my opinion. When this novel has reached, say 150-200+ chapters, I’d be a lot more inclined to begin reading again as I’m hoping various things will have been answered by then.

Really don’t understand how the MC can see all that he has in his vision, and still go about things like he isn’t facing a crisis. I’d expect him to be taking steps to prevent that future or at least be prepared for it, but his focus is this inconsequential wedding that I’m absolutely sure will end up in disaster.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Some 60 chapters? He makes an appearance for his hearing during that period of time, afterward he’s absent again.

You have serious issues. Your entire profile consist of you going from novel to novel asking whether or not there’s yuri. Are you that insecure of a person that it bothers you that much?

Story’s concept is intriguing, but leaves much to be desired. Aside from the obvious in relation to the novel’s title and Rose being Blake’s Sugar Mommy, the dynamic in their relationship isn’t all that much to my liking at the start. Blake is treated no different from a slave/pet for several dozen chapters before their relationship slowly starts to change for the better, the catalyst being him getting attacked as a means to hurt Rose. Their relationship in a way begins anew at this point and it looks like things will start to take a turn for the best, but then we’re sprung with some nonsense that pretty much halts all of that. Blake is accused of murder and is absent from the story for quite some time as Rose tries to navigate a way out of this predicament but nothing is going her way. Not to mention the switch in POV with other characters and their intimate moments that I honestly could care less about. Read up until the most recent chapters outside of privilege, and Blake still hasn’t been proven innocent while Rose struggles to do anything about it. Reading has been somewhat depressing thus far and my desire to continue any further has waned. Not fond of stories where nothing seems to be going well for the main leads. Primarily came for the romance, and it’s been lackluster for some time now. May check up on this in a few months should I remember, but otherwise going to be put on hold until this situation resolves itself.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I actually quite enjoy this novel. From the characters, their various interactions, the world building, even the sometimes questionable and overly mysterious plot. Author also does well in regard to not neglecting the harem members despite their continued growth in number, they each have a unique charm that sets them apart from one another. My main gripe with this novel is in how the author refuses to advance the MC’s Order. Anyone familiar with this genre have all read novels where the MC would be stagnant at a single level for dozens if not 100-200 chapters, but at least the reasons given were understandable and weren’t worth harping over. Here, that isn’t remotely close to being the problem as the MC advances by means of XP. The issue here is that it’s been accumulating for hundreds of chapters and the MC advances at a snails pace or not at all even if the situation calls for it. He can be facing death and rather than use the XP he has to perhaps make a last ditch effort, on several occasions he has just accepted the fact that he may just die. Isn’t that absolutely ridiculous? At this point, it’s clear that the author is just using this as a plot device to introduce more challenges to the MC and increase tension, but it’s done poorly and feels forced every single time. The initial excuse was that the MC wanted to refine his powers before advancing, then after a time it changed to him not arousing suspicion from others if he were to advance too fast. Previously, that made sense, but as of now when he should(author somehow always manages to introduce someone who can threaten his life every few dozen chapters) have no equal outside of the Main Continent, those reasons no longer matter. As of late, I had hope that he’d finally start utilizing his XP and advancing because apparently he can easily reach Peak 6th Order and it was stated that he’d start being less cautious, but not even a dozen chapters later and he almost dies once again. The author may as well be treating his readers as a joke at this point with such a glaring flaw in the story that has not been addressed after so long of many people pointing it out. Still a good read, but prepare yourself to be frustrated to no end when this type of situation continues to occur.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

So needlessly dramatic. Will never feel compelled to care about these sort of battles when I know he can advance in order, but the author refuses to do so in order for instances like this to happen. Feels entirely forced when this entire situation could’ve been avoided with overwhelming strength that’s easily available to him with no drawbacks whatsoever.

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