Comments of chapter undefined of The Last Blood Elf (Completed)

This story is kinda stupid af. It doesn't make sense... He doesn't need a wand, the only humans need wands and that is to help them with control and power. It's a joke if house-elves can use magic without while the pure-blooded elf can't... Then you have his random ass string ability. Like wtf how is that related to blood elves? Then the whole freedom thing... I would rather have a safe place to grow and learn. Get to a reasonable strength before leaving. I mean it's all well and good saying freedom is the best thing in the world. But that is until he gets found out and captured for being too weak... Overall, the story makes no sense and doesn't follow the logic of hp verse.. something kinda key for a hp story.

Harry doesn't know that he speaks anoother lenguage.

You don't have to call it an ice phoenix you could call blue luan. It is the ice version of the vermilion bird.

I honestly really like this

"Be careful not to draw attention, here you have the egg of an extinct creature to help you in your endeavours"

Are you gonna focus on this novel until the hiatus for your other book is done

your novel doesn't support powa stones I wanted to give some :(

I gave all my stones so don’t disappoint me

This whole thing just seems a lot like the goblins were forced not like they wanted to do it.

Keep up the good work

Thanks for the chapter!!

thanks for the chapter

I hope u dont drop this author-san And arigato mr roboto

Thanks for the chapter

good more chapters pleas