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My one major gripe is that the girls seem to have all but faded into set peases. We rarely have actual interactions with them, heck MJ didn't even merit any conversation or a date just a summary paragraph explaining that she liked him since before.
Gotta say for such a good story it ends with quite the let down, everything he achieved is erased. I suppose the one minor upside is that he might no longer be immortal and can thus have meaningful romantic relationships without worrying about them growing old and dying on him.