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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Systematic Shinobi

Live_A_Legend
Live_A_LegendLv13Live_A_Legend

This 1 arc is longer than some other fics ur doing… and it’s been 90% him tooting his own horn.

Choco_Monster
Choco_MonsterLv6Choco_Monster

Yes, F Kakashi

Bad_news
Bad_newsLv1Bad_news

Wow You are still alive and kicking Welcome back boss ..... Senju tsunade +1 main wife I hope Mc Conquer her... Take her Virginity I hope for a slow build up romantic comedy plot to her route... Don't rush things forward...

Bad_news
Bad_newsLv1Bad_news

Pakura

Dragon_forever
Dragon_foreverLv2Dragon_forever

Thanks for the chapter broo PS: Harem of Mc Hinata, ten ten, sakura, ino , temari and tsunade correct ??

Daddy_yhwach
Daddy_yhwachLv1Daddy_yhwach

you are streching this arc way too much buddy.

God_of_Wind_200
God_of_Wind_200Lv4God_of_Wind_200

RaKo
RaKoLv3RaKo

People really hate sakura don't they?? Kishimoto did a real poor job with the girls...

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

harem

Wesley_Grung_8822
Wesley_Grung_8822Lv4Wesley_Grung_8822

Great chapter loved all the flirting.

Derkkill
DerkkillLv5Derkkill

I think you should before Asuma's murder, pre-pregnant Kurenai and when her eggs are fertilized she has twins so she can have each one with a different surname, one will correspond to Sarutobi Mirai; and the other will have to continue the legacy of yuhi kurenai, with that he will have at least one of the father figures nearby

Brother_sly_1
Brother_sly_1Lv14Brother_sly_1

I don't know why but tenten as the only girl or main wife really irritates me.

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

bruhhh

Worn_out_by
Worn_out_byLv15Worn_out_by

A casual 30 or so chapters of filler chuunin exams

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

Harem and I really wish more chapters came out then this one chapter every two weeks to a month

Venerable_Adam
Venerable_AdamLv4Venerable_Adam

Hey mate I wanted to let you know that I love your work too ad you don't finish them but I wanted to ask from you as a fan if you would make a(katekyo hitman reborn ) fanfiction it is for be the best anime/manga and I wish to see my favorite anime written as a fanfiction by my favorite author

Visrow
VisrowLv14Visrow

Thanks for the great chapter!!!

Tora_ryu
Tora_ryuLv5Tora_ryu

keep up the good work author!!!

King_In_The_North_
King_In_The_North_Lv5King_In_The_North_

Kakashi 😭😭😭😭😭😭

Khaaos
KhaaosLv4Khaaos

Thanks for the chapter and more