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Comments of chapter undefined of The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage

easy_peesy
easy_peesyLv5easy_peesy

Only otto's will be great I think. For others it could be used to create suspense for further in the story.

ShadowsFall
ShadowsFallLv4ShadowsFall

Forget them, they aren't too important. They will have their screen time later in the team floors.

Fqqqqd
FqqqqdLv3Fqqqqd

I think it would be better for them to personally narrate their highlights after otto finishes and meets them.

Lheticus_Videre
Lheticus_VidereLv14Lheticus_Videre

Soooo according to the numbers given, we have a force of approximately 41,000. Anyone care to take bets on how many survive? Not altogether--that's obviously going to be 0 or close as darn. No...how many will even survive the initial trap? 3:D

SmilingPerson
SmilingPersonLv3SmilingPerson

blurbs are okay

FlyingHorse
FlyingHorseLv5FlyingHorse

So this is supposed to be a preliminary competition, right ? At what point does it end ? Was there a time limit that I missed ?

WISEDRAGON
WISEDRAGONLv6WISEDRAGON

Spelles more spells hell lot of spells ..... hahahaha ... otto the myriad magic caster hahahahhaha

Asura101
Asura101Lv6Asura101

Thank you, Maybe blurbs and what their mission is

Kolehmanni
KolehmanniLv14Kolehmanni

I think that Otto is the most important, but you could write a quick snipet of each of the others, just before they come out.

Greypanter
GreypanterLv5Greypanter

Hanks for the chapter! I would personnally prefer small highlights of their missions like you did with facing and killing a captain wolf

Crimson_Assassin
Crimson_AssassinLv12Crimson_Assassin

I literally cant think of a single thing that can be improved with your book, keep up the good work

Gulth
GulthLv13Gulth

Better a summary of their adventures after they pass the floor

Nic
NicLv6Nic

Thanks for the chapter. Waiting for more. 1 Question about Ofrand's boots. What happened to it ? How did its attributes change after tutorial as I remember those attributes was only for tutorial. Much appropriated if you can give some information about it in the next chapters.

Kotik_Kotik
Kotik_KotikLv5Kotik_Kotik

hype

NightLight
NightLightLv5NightLight

Thanks for the Chapter

NotOnTheApp
NotOnTheAppLv3NotOnTheApp

Imagine Trying To Get Last Hit When There Are Tens Of Thousands In Your Ranks

josh183rd
josh183rdLv14josh183rd

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Sparky357
Sparky357Lv14Sparky357

this is going to be beautiful

irl
irlLv7irl

thanks for the chapter! 😃 --and many victims for the trap have arrived already, but it seems our boy otto wants more. and jackal passes a test. or is it a setup for an even bigger trap? not sure if i'm being too suspicious or thinking too much. we'll just have to wait and see. 😊

BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5BrabbitX

wtf? wasn't this a single player instance? and anyway he accepted some RANDOM ass WEAK kid WIHTOUT CHECKING HIS STATS/CLASS just because the idiot tried to save him? This is so ****ign stupid AUTHOR. what if the kid is common class? will he get carried to godhood by mc because he took an arrow to the k...shoulder? fucking retarded. and yes i know he will probably have bronze or better classs, but w/e it's bullshit how u didn't make MC use analyze and see his stats. fucking cringe.