1st_Manga_KING
Dear Author, I am not here to demotivate you or hate your novel but I do hope that once you finish this novel, or gain some more writing experience, that you reread and rephrase some details on this chapter as it really hit my brain hard reading it. You could rephrase or rewrite it into some sort of mystery to keep more readers than just throwing some weird reasoning that makes makes people want to hit you or question your sanity. Do keep up the good work. Sincerely yours, the Silent Reader (I think my brain just crack)
Hmmm if there is anything wrong with this mc right now, it is that he has 0 humanity, which makes him unable to come over as a anti-hero figure, since even they need a glimpse of humanity to work. Im surprised his father’s friend decided to grant his last wish, because you know, he killed his friend....
ok...there just giving the protagonist too much like this is his 3rd last wish, how can someone have a 3RD LAST wish?? and nothing is his fault? NO! this is wrong and nothing like 1st chapter , and why would a friend of his dad help him? he killed his dad...witch means he killed the friend of that one powerful relative.. just NO!!!
I see what your trying to do since he was blamed for everything all the time he just stopped even trying to say anything in his defense and would accept it so if someone other than him killed his parents and framed him he would just accept it specially if it was someone who knew he would not fight it if you stop and think for a little you can kinda see that maybe it was the sis or maybe a bad friend but he does not give off the vibe of killer at least not right now or maybe im dead wrong we shall see