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Alireza_Rasouli2yrCommented"Damn, it's all cause of you SYSTEM!", he shouted yet again.- Alireza_Rasouli2yrCommented"Damn, it's all cause of you SYSTEM!", he shouted yet again.
- Alireza_Rasouli2yrCommented
P.L.O.T. A.R.M.O.R.
[ Analyzing the chances of Hybrid evolution ] - Alireza_Rasouli2yrCommented
this...is the best one I could find
'No way, I never expected them to make a move right when I'm paralyzed!' - Alireza_Rasouli2yrCommented
it was supposed to be hard.js
-> Hunt three Marieus Squirrels [ 11/3 ] - Alireza_Rasouli2yrCommented
yes you feel like the MC because of an common illness..PLOT ARMOR!!!
"Hehe, that's good... I feel like I'm some protagonist and this all is happening to me! It's fucking cool!", he was overly excited and failed to notice the river which had started to overflow due to the excess of filling up of water. - Alireza_Rasouli2yrCommented
jus...just stop
-> Dual Class is the rarest of among rare occurrences in which 2 classes are given under a job. - Alireza_Rasouli2yrCommented
there are soo many wired penalty like a TIME LIMIT FOR EVERY THING? or a randomized IMPORTANT CHANGE? idk but I like it that the MC is suffering at least
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they definitely should or they'll be extinct doe to choking by now
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you killed your own parents...YOU SHOULD KNOW HOW DYING LOOKS LIKE!!!
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YES! THAT'S THE POINT too bite you.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Alireza_Rasouli2yrReplied to 1st_Manga_KING
if you ask me it's more about what you're going to do with the 500 words NOT how I can force more fancy words there , you can tell a story in 1 page and be amazing and tell another in 500 pages and it will suck
This paragraph has been deleted. - Alireza_Rasouli3yrReplied to 1st_Manga_KING
level infinity weakest king is yours? well. I have bad news my friend...I'm planning on reading that one, so I guess you have to see my face there too.lol
This paragraph has been deleted. - Alireza_Rasouli3yrReplied to 1st_Manga_KING
but you still could double check it to be sure. j s
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am I am idiot? what kind of sentence is that????
This paragraph has been deleted. - Alireza_Rasouli3yrReplied to breadbringer
AT THIS POINT, a LOT of us are just reading to make fun of the MC and the book.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Alireza_Rasouli3yrCommented
I have found soooooo many writing problems , he is definitely not double checking too see what he has written. he's just winging it
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this is like the 4th writing error I've found
This paragraph has been deleted. - Alireza_Rasouli3yrReplied to FlammableFire
for crying out loud
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it's like you read my mind before I had read the book
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