Comments of chapter undefined of Earth's Alpha Prime

This chapter has a lot of system prompts that blow up the word count but do little more than tell us that his skill level increased. Minor Sword Mastery increased to level xyz, or as simple level xyz->abc would suffice and cut down on redundancy.

@author, please decrease the amount of filler words.

so far so good, but could the mc get a range weapon, like a bow? it go good with is hydraulic legs and poison blood skill.

When is he going to train his dagger skill?

I like that hes training alot but hes not using his ability to its fullest that bring grinding mobs for skills and stats

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How many clothes did he take with him

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He can take his ruined sweat shirt and make more bandage strips. also he didn't go into the spider cave? why not? Was there still to many lesser spiders for him to explore what was in there? might have been some spirit items in there!!! Remember be careful of info dumps. instead of character advancement A-B-C-D-E-F-G-H... try character reached level h after.... or increased abilities after an hour of concentration reached lvl in said ability.

hmm

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