The_High_Father
I mean looking back to it I should have seen it coming there were lots of flags like Asgards Racism Hela Him getting Olympic divinity The MC saying that Zeus is a better person than Odin (I MEAN COME ON ZEUS IS SUCH A ASSHOLE IN LEGENDS) Odin asking for Olympic techniques Yeah I should have seen this coming from a mile
I think this was well done and inevitable. The MC was stupid in that he is young ,he doesn't know what caused the previous wars with Olympians, maybe Zeus is only using Mc as fake diplomat then start something OR that divine power Zeus allowed to take is some kind of Trojan horse,idk. What I did like is that MC stood up for himself gg . Odin comparing him to them and calling him replaceable was not good but bound to happen as this is a clash of personalities both are proud ,hence inevitable *chuckles in Thanos*
Well, that's a development! That escalated faster than I thought it would! This is gonna be pain for you to write, especially when the canon starts. ** You'll need a very big reason for Odin to do that, because no matter how mad Odin is, he can't do something like that willy nilly. He'll be risking a civil war if any of this came to light. He basically betrayed one his best soldiers for his pride and racism. Heimdall knows it too. Heimdall is a lot of things but he's a good man in all sense of the word. His belief might get shaken down and might even leave asgard cause shit went berserk when Odin decided to betray his friend for a mere conversation.
I mean I get it and all but this seems very out of character from the odin we know, so I guess this is an oc odin? Plus thor was fragga? biological son as well so this change is confusing. Also if we take things from a different perspective the mc has been a power-hungry whore and don't forget Odin would know all this thanks to eye guy. He has been spreading legends of himself to the people of the earth for his vain (I don't mind it but we're looking from a different perspective) Yes, Odin left him on earth to wind down, however, what does the mc do? He goes to another kingdom on opposite sides to his (frankly there still enemies only teaming to face a greater threat) absorbs there divinity becoming more like them etc He then returns to offer an alliance that he had no right to make as still just another god on Asgard. He then forcibly argues with Odin who is the king because he didn't want to accept it when mc thought he should. Mc clearly forgetting about all the animosity that is between the two people and only taking his own experiences into account. The proceeds to childishly argue more with Odin. I mean clearly, he has grown a bit too arrogant in himself no? Odin is how old? How many talents has he seen? Mc may think he is some god favoured genius but he is still so pathetically weak compared to the bigger guys... I'm not trying to hate or anything but you gotta take in the perspective of those around him. The mc is still like in his 100s he is still so so very young for there species and him throwing his weight around is like what? But yeah, hope you see what I am trying to say?