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Comments of chapter undefined of The System: Civilian Shinobi

Kronos333
Kronos333Lv12Kronos333

where is today's advanced chapter on discord?

Pill_Guy
Pill_GuyLv2Pill_Guy

I don't like it. This is basically the same as your gf's friends convincing her that you did something wrong, then she comes home and is mad at you for no reason and you literally did nothing wrong.

sayanth_sk
sayanth_skLv13sayanth_sk

Tell ino about the life changing decision??? why?? they were not in a relationship at all...its none of her business...and tsunade chooses to mess and punish him?? again why?? he chose to sacrifice a happy love life for the sake of the village...especially considering he is a civilian and grew up witnessing the happy married life his own parents have going for them...he did it for the sake of the village and now he has to be punished by these bitches...man I don't get the words to describe how frustrating this feels

lok_98
lok_98Lv4lok_98

while it was going good.if this is the way it's going to go then I will probably drob this😒.temari,ino f uck both of them.there r still lots of waifu in Naruto chose.we still don't know what ino will chose.if sasuke accept her will she chose tobi?nah.she will choose sasuke😑.and temari for her it's just a mission.so f uck the indecisive bi tch and wanna be betrayer bi tch😎

Benjamin_Bebans
Benjamin_BebansLv1Benjamin_Bebans

Author even though this fic has had its ups and downs I never complained, but this, this is fucking shit

Undertimed
UndertimedLv4Undertimed

So let me get this straight. The Mc was under the kotoamatsumaki when the marriage agreement happened, so he had no choice there, because he had to follow Danzo's orders. Then there is also the fact that the Mc read Itachi's file, which made him believe in protecting the Village even more, since Itachi killed his own clan to do so, and not to mention that he is a big fan that wants to and wishes to be stronger than the Fourth Hokage, he was deeply affectionate towards the third hokage, who wanted him to protect the village, along with him having the mindset of sacrificing everything, even himself to protect those he cares about. So from all this it is obvious that when he was asked to continue or let go of the marriage he would say yes in order not to start a possible war, because he understands that the third hokage just died and that he believed in protecting the village. He sacrificed his love life for the sake of not letting the village go to war, and yet these b****es are out here plotting a way to make him feel guilty for what he did. First off, guilty for what for wanting to protect the village. Second, why does Tsunade even care, she should be doing Hokage work not trying to get involved in a kid's problems. Third, Tobi is technically speaking the strongest ninja apart from Kakashi, Guy, and the Hokage herself who are still inside the village, and your out here trying to guilt trip him, what are trying to make him another Sakumo and have him commit suicide. And lastly, these are all things he had no control over, he couldn't do anything about this, and yet Ino, who can control her feelings of who she loves, chose Sasuke in front of Tobi and yet she still out here complaining about how Tobi didn't choose her over the village, like B***h you ain't greater than the village.

Lackofsense
LackofsenseLv4Lackofsense

Lol it would be do funny in where its Tobi who doesn’t have a thing for ino anymore but just feels awkward around her. While its Ino who still believes theres something between each other and is blaming him for everything.

Maple
MapleLv11Maple

Hum... were Tobi and Ino a couple ? Because I don't remember when Tobi accepted her love. Am I missing something ?

DrMcTitties
DrMcTittiesLv4DrMcTitties

Feel sorry for tobi to fair He feels as though the weight of konoha is on his shoulders. He wants to try avoid a war But some hoes tryna **** with him because of their feelings

GodSpeed28
GodSpeed28Lv4GodSpeed28

I genuinely wish he abandons Konoha and get the **** out of this god forsaken village. Everyone is trying to manipulate him!

Dollar
DollarLv6Dollar

Sorry, but this chapter was really bad...

SnowRose
SnowRoseLv14SnowRose

Please dont drop Temari just because Ino made him feel guilty... Its clear Temari is trying her best to make things work with the Mc whether she got a mission or not. When the fourth war comes around or even before that when Gaara takes over, no one will force them to kill eachother or do anything with the children. If it still is forced at that point then its just bad writing because Gaara for sure wouldnt, and the Fourth War brings everyone together essentially righting most past wrongs and grudges. The only advice i can give is make this a Harem at this point. Its the only way you can save this sinking ship. Most people dont like harem novels but if you keep it at Temari and Ino only you have a chance of keeping a manority of your readers. If you dump Temari or force her to fall in love with someone else just to have Ino you WILL loose over half of your readers. Please just listen to all those who care about the book, we are seriously tring to help you get over this hurdle with the least amount of damage, but when you dont answer us and continue to push it down that path it causes us to want to give up on the book as well. Idk man, its sad.

_DebtCollector
_DebtCollectorLv12_DebtCollector

I don't think I like where this is going. When not portrayed right romance can ruin a story and make a character or character's absolutely dislikable(Ino, Tsunade, and the MC), don't go down that path author(Especially with all this pointless drama). Also, apparently a person from the author's Patreon is the one making all of Ino's decision's and the author just follow's that, all I'm gonna say is that it was and is a bad decision.

Yan_Gustavo
Yan_GustavoLv1Yan_Gustavo

preferred temari

Berserker_Dragon
Berserker_DragonLv4Berserker_Dragon

why is this getting shittier.Last time i remember he was not in a relationship with ino.NOW all of a sudden they r in a relationship.WTF is going on. WTF.WTF.WTF..WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF..WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF..WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF..WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF..WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF..WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF..WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF..WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF..WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF..WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF..WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF..WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF..WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF..WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTF.WTFđŸ˜‘đŸ˜”đŸ˜”đŸ˜‘đŸ˜”đŸ˜‘đŸ˜”đŸ˜”đŸ˜”đŸ˜”đŸ˜”

SepoysBreeze
SepoysBreezeLv5SepoysBreeze

Too much reading CYOA fics.. and this is crossing my mind.. hahaha Skitter mode: -The Gamer(offshoot) -Being Tobi is Suffering -Wanted by ROOT -Wanted by TOBI -Akatsuki is Hiring -Reincarnated -Kishimoto? Who is Kishimoto? -Moon Eye Plan -Geas: Pushover -Geas: Authority's Bitch -Geas: Weak to female

Legendary_Otaku
Legendary_OtakuLv6Legendary_Otaku

You know what, I feel like I'm reading a Japanese harem novel, which I like it. Please don't give a sh*t about other comments. We love the story. There are many people who love this. This novel isn't just on 2nd place for a show. We are ready to read all sh*t you throw at us. Just DON'T F*CKING DROP THIS. AND I AM DEFFINETLY NOT jinksing ABOUT DROPPING NOVEL.

Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

Wait, wait... Now Tsunade is being ridiculous.... She clearly know why Tobi done this... But I can totally saw her doing something like this though...

UncrownedKing
UncrownedKingLv14UncrownedKing

honestly looking at some of these comments is funny. you can clearly tell who's been in a relationship and who hasn't.

WorkingAuthor
WorkingAuthorLv1WorkingAuthor

This is just a badly developped teenage drama that makes less sense than Twilight.

prince_awesome
prince_awesomeLv4prince_awesome

AUTHOR STOP WITH ALL THE BULLSHIT