Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

I mean I overall like the novel but I have some substantial gripes. For one, this core nonsense. HP is not cultivation story or RPG. Magic is more like force in Star Wars. You might be really powerful and be able to wield more force, but it's not something you store inside of you like some mana pool. It's everywhere and you can use more of it with practice and due to natural gifts. Also you can't just download people's memories with Legilimency, even for unprotected mind it takes effort to dig trough memories, especially without wand. Even with his eyes it should take effort and skill to read minds, not opposite. Shoulder length hair is also kinda cringe when out of cultivation context. **. I actually googled legilimency and found quote from book: "The mind is not a book, to be opened at will and examined at leisure. Thoughts are not etched on the inside of skulls, to be perused by any invader. The mind is a complex and many-layered thing, Potter. Or at least most minds are... It is true, however, that those who have mastered Legilimency are able, under certain conditions, to delve into the minds of their victims and to interpret their findings correctly."

What's this about if his wand is taken from him nonsense? He doesnt even need a wand with his adaptability. All he needs to do is practice and he can even surpass people wandlessly. Why a knife? He already failed miserably stabbing that guy and running away in a narrow tunnel from a ranged attacker instead of sticking to him and going for the throat. Not using his transmuting to smack his face with rock dust or shotgun him with rubble with a magic burst from his hand. It sounds like he fully intends to rely on his wand and not come up with anything creative. Just an enchanted knife.

Why was there so much emphasis on going for the wand with your aunt? if in the end they brought him to the store and left. and generally received the wand only the next day. Why write something, focus attention on it, if you cannot convey your idea normally and knock everything into the trash?

yes at least he isn't like MY BEST WAND EVER MADE MWAHAHAHHAAH

A custom wand? How unoriginal.

Love the wand.

Loved the wand idea! Btw, thanks for clarifying on his 'dual cores'. I was worried that it would ruin what has been a clearly well thought out story thus far.

The wand config sounds like it belongs to a foreign company's new CPU.

still does not beat the liquid basilisk venom core wand from another fic.

Golden core cultivator in HP? Also this gaseous liquid magic thing is from Warlock in Magus world

I thank you for the chapter

I thank you for the chapter.

Nice

I always wonder why only one wand and then have to scramble when something happens to it specially when you know you have issues finding a wand that is compatible with the MC

Olivanders is a shop for choosing the beautiful wands. I watch on the first Harry Potter at that time.

Thanks for chapter!

Thanks for the chapter!!

thanks for the chapter! keep up the amazing work

tnx for the chapter