Comments of chapter undefined of The Lost Heir (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

Bruh is it just me or I saw nothing wrong with what MC did he did not need to apologise to cho personally, she was sort of begging for attention. Please stop making MC act like his age when he mentally isn't and don't let choxMC happen if your not gonna seperate her from her friends because it seems to be their fault when cho becomes stuck up in the books.

ok mc was 20 so how come I feel the mc is becoming dencer and acting like a 12 year now

this scene was just plain unnecessary

Why is he acting like a little bítch while constantly moaning about how he doesnt fear death? Such pointless cringe drama seriously... Not to mention he could've just shadow traveled to the nurse instead we have an entire chapter of fúcking posturing while he slowly makes sure every sees him injured....

please Don't Harem is ruin the story also i really like dafne x Fred

Really disappointed in this MC. Character is not defined and it doesn't make any sense with all this forced relationships. Under 3stars so far in my scale of fnfics.

mc is going to shite. he has a 20 year old mentality but acts like his body age. he constantly whines about people staring but then says he doesn't care but then bends over trying to make friends. author you need to decide how it's going to be, is he going to be the strong intelligent type or the little cringy whiney bitch he seems to be going for. I will say the Grim was a nice twist for a change.

Zhou and Fared no

Mc really is a Mr. Nice type huh.

Yeah this mc is a joke now

Choxfred 🥰🥰 or team harem :v

Dense mc😪

Thanks for the chapter

Thank You For The Chapter Mr Author 😜 A Fantastic Chapter As Always 😉

Thank for chapter and more

Thanks for the chapter

Well, only the og.

Exp

Thank you😆