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Ferro1dCommentedThe divine essence coalesced, forming a brilliant luminescence that danced and swirled, gradually assuming a tangible shape. From the ethereal mist emerged the unmistakable figure of Vlad Tepes, a perfect human vessel meticulously crafted by Eru's divine touch.- Ferro12dCommented
Maybe you should worry about quality over quantity. There are master pieces with 15k a chapter released either weekly or monthly or something like that.
AN: I don't understand why it's hard for me now to write three chapters; maybe it's because I've increased the words per chapter. Previously, I was writing chapters of 1,200 to 1,300 words, but now they are 1,400 to 1,700 words. I'm sorry to disappoint you, but I still can't do it. - Ferro14dReplied to SLappY
Yeah that is kinda weird.
As Pete started walking back toward Arcanine, Courtney quickly tried to explain, "It isn't what it looks like! Ugh, okay, it is! But I didn't plan for this to happen! And I didn't make out with Jasmine! It was one brush of our lips while drunk and lightheaded!" - Ferro17dCommentedMoves: Gravity, Healing Wave, Healing Bell
- Ferro19dCommentedCh 71 Meeting of the Gods Part 1
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you are repeating yourself.
But even as she missed him, Ino couldn't help but feel a sense of pride in her heart. Koushin had entrusted her with his secret technique, and she was determined to make him proud. She knew that he had faith in her abilities, and that thought alone gave her the strength to continue her training, no matter how difficult it may be. - Ferro1mthReplied to TheFanficGod
Pedo author? wow....
Ino's eyes would occasionally linger on mine, and her smile seemed to grow brighter whenever our gazes met. We danced around each other, neither one of us quite willing to admit our feelings openly. It was a game we both enjoyed playing, each of us carefully testing the waters, seeing how far we could push before retreating back into the safety of our casual friendship. - Ferro2mthCommented
Nice decision. If a little abrupt but really good development. good job imo
AN: The author noticed that the system made a lot of mistakes, so he decided to eliminate this cancer for the betterment of the plot. - Ferro2mthCommented
Dialog is kinda dumb. Is this AI? My dude, the attack already happened what do you mean? It's already war.
"Is the Raikage intent on starting a full-blown war between our villages?" Hiruzen's words echoed through the clearing, each syllable carrying the weight of responsibility and concern. The forest seemed to hush in anticipation, awaiting Dodai's response. - Ferro5mthCommented
What hate exactly? Neither Saiken nor Chomei had done soemthing to warrant hate from Uzu
"Although I would try to control the hate towards you by the shinobi but I can't do anything about the hate you will get from the civilians since they mostly won't understand what a jinchuriki is and their significance to our village. They would likely consider you as a monster." - Ferro6mthReplied to Goutham_Cp
Legend of the Seeker. Books are good after you watch the series.
Jasmine, who ranked just below Cain and Xander in the previous test, entered the plaza with her own following of over twenty people, most of them young women, and took up position on the northern side. A few young men trailed behind her, but they appeared to be low in status, being scolded by the girls. - Ferro7mthCommentedCh 185 Chapter 185: Adzuki
- Ferro7mthReplied to UnderChain
That series was so good though.... Read the books, they are also good.
Jasmine, who ranked just below Cain and Xander in the previous test, entered the plaza with her own following of over twenty people, most of them young women, and took up position on the northern side. A few young men trailed behind her, but they appeared to be low in status, being scolded by the girls. - Ferro7mthReplied to _VoidSlayer_
Started reading that but the MTL got too heavy for me, I don't even understand some chapters due to that.
"Murkrow, I swear to you, in this life I shall never abandon you," the boy vowed, and the creature seemed to sense the determination in his voice, for it let out another cry, "Caw!" - Ferro7mthCommentedCh 158 Chapter 158:
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I'm pretty sure is Jon
"Aoto I have something to ask." John suddenly placed the rice bowl on the table and asked. - Ferro7mthCommented
Good dialogue. But these 191 chapters feel like a prelude (prologue) to something bigger, at least to me, the sheer power scale does up my expectations of the future conflict. So in theory, judging by the pace of this fic, this should be 500+chapters with some original apocalyptic/cataclismic events coming. Something like the Horde from WoW invading or the like. Imagine, Don't fear to turn into a crossover if you like my dude. You have grown as an Author since I've started following you, amazing job!
Ch 191 First Men & Andals (Part I) - Ferro7mthCommented
In my mind she said "Hittokiri Battousai"
"Katori Batsu'unsai. But I like to go by Batsu."