kessu91
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I'm confused. Did you forget your MC was reincarnated? "Devlin nodded his head. He was not satisfied by the answer, but really didn't have a choice anyways." I get hes pretending not to know and acting like a kid to fit in but why is his inner monologue that when he knows why the corridor is banned?... Also can you dial down the fanboi? Hes an adult and obviously knows a 1 year old baby can't do S so seeing him treat a kid like some tourist attraction is just jarring as F.
......really? They aren't even actually friends yet and his about tell him hes the reincarnation of Merlin? Are you serious right now?
You really have a massive hard on for Ron don't you? Its every chapter since the train that MC spent teaching him instead of doing anything about his future...
Every single inner monologue you've written for Ron has been about the guy who solved the cipher not Harry Potter... I mean seriously? Your not actually setting him up to be a friend or something like that? First the lazy BS with the house and now with a school full of children even the people he spent time with are the same....
Turns out his life lessons with Ben meant nothing in the end?...
And why could not ask someone vring him the materials? Or just order them in mail?.........
What kind brain dead BS is this? His school supplies alone would cost hundreds of thousand of British pounds with an exchange rate like this........
Forced quests that have punishments for failing and random enemies sent to kill him? What is this Dog-S?........
They literally created a F map of the school and Lupin was skilled enough to teach not to mention the animagus requires mastery over several branches of magic... I mean where is this S even coming? Just random totally inaccurate claims made with supreme confidence in every chapter.
Spoken like a true communist slave. Yeah lets remove all knowledge of dark magic from the populace. Only the government needs to have access to these after all... Also where does this moron think teachers come from?
And now its just random things that didn't happen...
.......oh yeah. Its a Chinese book... No wonder the last chapters have been of a mentally challenged clown somehow performing worse than the average children and the constant moaning about how the house is for leftovers. Leftovers that happen make up most of the government and businesses on the alley and Hogsmeade...
??? The house of hard work coming up with excuses why they won't try something? Did this author even read the books?
Woah MC is a real winner isn't it he?........
Really? Maybe he should invest more points in intelligence if he somehow failed to notice the wand has an issue?
I don't get your timeline. There should be year/s in-between purge of Stratholme and Arthas the death knight coming back from Northrend. Since there's nothing about the undead yet the Syndicate should still be in Alterac and Thrall should be liberating the camps with Doomhammer still alive. Since the time between Thrall becoming the Warchief and Horde sailing to Kalimdor was not that great.
The interment camps where the orcs are kept are literally in Hillsbrad and Arathi....
Human did not travel to Kalimdor until after Lordaeron fell so how does he know about nagas?