alex02373
No offense author, but I don't like it 😛 Let's go back to outsmarting opponents or name calling to distract them or acting a different way to fool em all! If u wanna indulge in more of this though, would request u to keep it short ( 1-2 chapters) and plz don't make it into harem (honestly most stories get spoiled real bad when they venture into harem with everyone from harem losing their personality and becoming mindless clones of each other).
It seems to me alone that the romantic line is very unnatural? and you are trying to build a romantic line as if it happens between two ordinary people, and then you write about the world of Pokemon and about a strong strong-willed trainer. for me it's better for you to give up romance altogether than to write an ordinary story that does not fit into the characters of the characters and their life as coaches