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Don't worry to much about it the story is good either way.

hey, I don't want to over criticize since I like the story, for me the pacing of the story to feel rushed. I known that you probably want to write about other topics considering the future chapters, but I think it might make the story better if snek had more flaws and struggles, while making his personality around those and the few memories snek still has. also I kind of expected snek to feel some sort of 'repulsion' while trying to 'compress' his aura (**: I think there was a missed opportunity of making aura sort of like magnets cause 'repulsion' and 'attraction')

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I was looking through the reviews and there was someone(named samien)who spammed around 80~ and more 5 star reviews for no reason except to inflate the stars on this story. currently that's are the only account I seen, which makes me believe that all of the reviews are alts from the author so I am going to counter spam. anyone that reads this can hate all they want, but it doesn't matter whether its a good or bad story this should be aloud to happen. Personal review: the story is bad. (there is no significant character development, its dull, has bad grammar when I tried reading this)

Its a good chapter, but I hope that you won't prioritize romance over the story.