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Comments of chapter undefined of My Pick Up Artist System

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Win_Vineeth
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I guess he forgot about the mass message he sent out just hours before

Trexquote
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xp

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Siric
SiricLv10Siric

First of all - Excellent work I came for the r-18, i waited 100 chapters and i dont regret. P.d. Ben knows that the world is not 'normal' (by the system, succubus, etc.). I hope Ben enjoys his life on his own terms (the crazy system doesn't count jaja). Ben can have it all (fame, power, money, connections, etc.). he doesn't need to be 'generic', a good development doesn't need romance to be a good novel (It can be at the end, whether it's harem or not.). there are more emotions that can be developed (hate, obsession, admiration, fear, contempt, possessiveness, the forbidden, yandere..., etc...) there's already a bit of a nympho plot jaja. The author's comedy, ¡mandatory! Excellent work. P.d.2 I hope a lot r-18

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L0ST_IN_TIME
L0ST_IN_TIMELv15L0ST_IN_TIME

a good *** game means no shame

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Alanray64
Alanray64Lv14Alanray64

Now the question is, whats in the box 😁

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FunnyBuns
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Well, at least we got closure on Penelope. She is good for a one-night stand or a booty call but really isn't girlfriend material seeing as Ben isn't her first affair(though he might be the last affair she has with the current boyfriend).

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DogWithHat
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Dark_Chain
Dark_ChainLv13Dark_Chain

wait, he sent an extremely awkward mass message, a ruined room, a blue thing on a bottle on his pocket and he is dead ass asleep. Doesn't that look like suicide at first glance

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Saint_Nicholas
Saint_NicholasLv3Saint_Nicholas

My man, your lyrical genius grows chapter by chapter.... and I hate you for it ❤

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subairasaq
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I have finally read all the chapters

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ErectileReptile
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Kingibo
KingiboLv15Kingibo

naisu

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EvilHeaven
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Cucking all the gods in olympus was actually written by another R-18 author. But it was more of reincarnation flashback to when he was a god. A good idea to bring back that concept with a more thought out story.

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Daoist6t1fkL
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thanks for the chapter

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RARC19
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Tanks for the chapter!

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Salkel212
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thanks for the chapter

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Daoist2Ejy4J
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awossom rating

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VSilver
VSilverLv11VSilver

Enfim... Finalmente kkk

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qoronk
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thanks

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BigZampano
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Nice new cover you'f got there Autor-Sama

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NixLi
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Used 4 Fast Pass just to read this chap in advance and well its f*cking good. Keep Up Author.