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10) a little action is lacking so far right ... but I know it's close so it's good, the degree of obscenities is great and the plot .... I already said ... concluding his novel is great, maybe it’s not even slow and I’m a little hurried forgive me kkk I don’t know your plans it’s just that I see many stories ahead and not a good ending at that speed, it happens a lot that the author speeds up the ending and it leaves so many things unfinished because it spent so much time in the beginning.

Avaliação 1) it is a good story, but as I said before it is slow, the feeling is that only days have passed in the story. 2) It may seem like hypocrisy kkk, but it was good, I really like the way you deal with their emotions, never leaving an interaction between them without conclusion. 3) Not much has changed except for a little mental maturation. 4) very good, short, but explained everything that should be understood. 5) I don't have much to say about them yet. 6) Sun, Milia, the wolf girl, the witch of time and the Santa (forgive me I am terrible with kkkk names), They are the people who bring the best moments there, a little drama, relationships, emotion and hehe ... 7) I don't really know (maybe the king of the beasts ... maybe ... kkk) 8) It's good, but slow ... 9) brother ... keep it up, it's great hehehe .... kkkk 10) a little action is lacking so far right ... but I know it's close so it's good, the degree of obscenities is great and the plot .... I already said ... concluding his novel is great, maybe it’s not even slow and I’m a little hurried forgive me kkk I don’t know your plans it’s just that I see many stories ahead and not a good ending at that speed, it happens a lot that the author speeds up the ending and it leaves so many things unfinished because it spent so much time in the beginning.

it is a great novel, just that it already has many tips for many other volumes which has caused a slow development so far, maybe it is the wait for new chapters (which is normal, no complaints), but the feeling I have is that it has only been days in the development of the story, we go to volume 5 and he hasn't even made the contract yet ... let's go to the volume evaluation now >>>>》

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Of course this is just my opinion everyone has yours and can like what they want

Mano, I saw a lot of people complaining because it is not the same cliché as always and many putting themselves in the place of Mc, So what I have to say is that this is a fantasy novel, what is the problem of putting a cliché there? Then the guy may have a cliché when it comes to using a system but he can't act, which shit still comes close to comparing real life to "logic", and having a system is logical, having powers and martial arts is logical? if I wanted to see something real I would watch a soap opera on TV and it’s not like that ... MC without courage, he is only weak because he didn’t use his system as he should and before I came to talk shit I’ve seen many novels, many romances, many, well before using the web novel, and I confess that I’m already sick of the same clichés as always, but there is no lack of cliche, it's not just a boring MC.

The duchess is an unknown, before the part of the coliseum her image was like a spiteful or rejected betrayed wife, but with the events it is really hard to say, it doesn't seem like she hates him (Sol) it is just a comparison with his father and with everything that happened she is like a jealousy or the fact that she doesn't accept that he looks like his father (except for the romantic part) ... Anyway, it's really hard to say with the data we have now, the top part is just a possibility or not, it depends on the author's point of view and will ... (I don't particularly care how he gets it, what he does is kkkk)

THE DUCHESS MANO ..... THAT'S THAT, WHAT A SPOILER THAT WONDERFUL INTERPRETATION KKKK, WE ALREADY KNOW A POSSIBLE GUINEA PIG FOR THE MIRROR WORLD ... GOOD STAY IN FRANCE, I HOPE YOU GET WHAT PRECURE URA AND DO NOT ABANDON THE ROMANCE OK ?? 🤙😋

Obrigado pelo cap. 🤙😋

I'm here again mr. thanks for the chapter 🤙 And how so 2040? 🤧😥

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Awesome bro, very good! something new that I didn’t expect and very well done, there’s not much to talk about so it was very good so far, it had stopped, but I’m here again, thanks for the cap. 🤙

Very good! is ... any possibility of a serial release ??? efim forgive my anxiety kkkk is that it is really very good and I saw in your profile there are other works in 25, 30 cap. in this specific you will continue right? so constant or daily ... efim if you can launch some 10 cap every now and then kkkk thank you and have my stones ... 🤙😜

Obrigado pelo capítulo🤙 Poderia ser mais? Não? Entendo 😢🤧

Irmão, um romance que tem uma boa proposta ok, deveria se ter ótimo desenvolvimento( infelizmente não) e mano tinha base pra da certo, muita base, não sei oque acontece autor, mas seus diálogos são forçados é enjoativo, eu juro que tentei ler, mas estou me esmpurando e é apenas o 82 cap.... espero que melhore a sua gramatica pq ta difícil.