The authors note for this chapter literally says his original plan was to kill the mother off but decided against it, now things like the protagonist halo are just excuses the author made after the fact to justify keeping her alive. I was telling the other dude that not everyone is going to accept the excuses the author made and they shouldn't be expected to either.

Oh and if they want to redeem a character there should at least be a redemption arc, not a single chapter, which is like putting a bandaid on a fatal wound and saying the patient is cured.

Later chapters were a complete mess. Especially with Na Xinyi herself. After over a few dozen chapters of info dumps it was getting real tiring, then the author does like one chapter of character building and redemption for Na Xinyi and calls it done. At that point I only temporarily dropped it hoping he would expand on her character and try to iron out a lot of the negative stuff she has done during the course of the series, but after a few dozen or a hundred chapters and seeing no further expansion I just called it quits. Basically the author applied a bandage to her character and considered it complete. Thinking back now the author might have made some changes as Na Xinyi becoming his wife was the result of some sort of vote a few years ago and not the authors original intent. You know readers and their inability to let a single girl not end up in the MCs harem. He also had a tendency to go on long hiatuses back then creating gaps in the story, not sure if he still does it, but after hiatuses he would forget certain details, causing later chapters to contradict earlier ones. Either way I really couldn't accept Na Xinyi and even with later novels it became one of my peeves that if the author is going to go out of his way to make us dislike a character, they shouldn't attempt to redeem them later.

Either you are mistaken or the author went back and edited that in. At the very least when my comment was made she was undecided. Then again I don't really have any reason to believe you either. Well in the end I dropped this work long ago anyway so I don't really care.

That is 4 out of 5 not 3/5.

Are you mentally well, you speak with such certainty about things you weren't here to witness nor have any way of confirming. The very fact that I pointed out such an inconsistency literally proves that even if changes were made in the time since my comment, that it was impossible to change before my comment. Literally how can the author fix a mistake pointed out by readers before they even bother to point it out. Your claims are just physically impossible, as even if the author had time travel and could fix the mistake before I commented I would literally have Zero reason to make such a comment in the first place and this discussion wouldn't be happening right now.

Though the fact that you are comparing him to an actual dragon leads me to believe you are one of those people who didn't pay attention while reading, as opposed to someone born a dragon with all dragonic traits the protagonist is evolving and gradually gaining traits. One was born with two hearts, the other was originally supposed to gain a second one through evolution and are not comparable. At the very least this is how the story was in the early chapters when they were first releasing, not sure if the author fixed the inconsistencies that created this whole fiasco.

Is it two people out of hundreds didn't understand or just that most that understood chose not to speak up? Obviously he has had two hearts for a while now no doubt about it. Anyone with the ability to read can see that, but only people who actually paid attention when reading found out that he made retroactive changes without saying anything. I haven't read this in a while as I was disappointed in the authors inability to admit his mistakes, so maybe he actually fixed it without saying anything, not like this author hasn't done it before. Too prideful to admit he was wrong but at least intelligent enough to fix his mistakes. Either way I suggest you not speak up about things you do not know anything about. The fact that there was a mistake is really not up for debate regardless of what the author says, and nothing you say can change it either.

It would be nice if he could also subdue all those disasters, just like he did with Nayan and Ravenna. Kia would also be a key to conquering Anya and turning her into his subordinate. Azrail going from minor Villain to the boss of all the universes top villains would be cool.

When did I falsely accuse you. You literally said you see no problem with your girl banging someone else, that can only be possible if you have a cuckold fetish. Don't falsely accuse me of falsely accusing you just because you live in denial. Then again I guess there is no point in continuing with someone who lives in denial. The best I can do is not judge you, but I can't make someone admit to things they don't want to.

I never insulted you, if you have a cuckolding fetish it doesn't bother me as that is your business. I congratulated you on coming out of the closet and you got angry.

I didn't say anything inappropriate, on the other hand you cussing me out after getting so upset over the truth is quite the issue as you are hypocritical. Not that such a website is a family friendly website in the first place. I guess you are a bit delusional.

And that is why you're a cuck, your girl cheats on you and you see it as acceptable.

I get it the truth hurts. Unfortunately the truth doesn't care about how you feel.

Man I appreciate the info and that you seem to be starting to move the story forward, but as you said he needs to get them all to a similar level first, unless you plan to do a time skip soon(which I admit we need) it would be better to list them as they became the focus.

I don't really have it in me to correct newcomers anymore. Please refer to previous comments to know why you are wrong. And congrats on being a cuck.

I'll return that question with why not have them? Either way the answer is personal preference.

If you look at the authors note it is clear what the original intent was. Why should people accept a cop out the author made due to his inability to follow through with his original plan?

According to what was previously stated you'd be right, but what if the transformation process took like 5 months. Then it would be reasonable. It may have been covered in a few dozen or hundreds words but the actual process may have taken months.