Comments of chapter undefined of Hunter x Hunter: A Selfish Wish (COMPLETED)

imagine the dude who send him to this world is yami after he became a god.

well it's rare to see a fanfiction ending but it was good .. btw I am still angry about komugi you ass hole .. write Fullmetal alchemist it will be a challenge but if you succeed you will be the only one with a famous FMA fanfic because until now I read we're shit ...

Don’t continue the story and just make an epiloque, many stories get ruined due to them going to different worlds etc and it breaks the whole flow when they usually get TOO strong at the start and when they get too weak its bad as well

what are you going to post on webnovel next?

it was a good read at first. sadly the latter parts started to degrade. The MC was absolutely empty he had no purpose except to get strong which is a rather major turn off..

I feel like, this ending is quite good... Not perfect, but good. You stop it in the best part of it. Another Epilogue and it would be like a beautifully decorated cake.

Since I'm not up to date with HxH I just really enjoyed the ride with an OP MC and I found all this royal family business quite the useless nonsense. I'm sad that I won't get to see a finale where he simply upgraded all stats to literal god level and just ruled the World in the open. I was sure that's what we were going for. Still, thanks for the entertainment, I will check out your other stories as well!

Saramada, jax...

You thought it was a rob that brought you here, but

awesome chapter I think that you have reason and you can come to this story when hxh will have more content so maybe in like 20 years :D ? or when author of the original dies and you will be able to spin what ever you want ( MAD SNAIL I AM LOOKING AT YOU who makes 1 chapter per month?)

All I Humbly ask is that you make hour next oc less dark. You have the world, you have the system, all hou need is a likeable mc and boom, spirit stones up the wazoo

Personally I prefer that you end here. Anyway it has another one from HxH so you can improve that one. The same is your choice.

You should make a completely evil mc not like Yami because he cares about his family someone who will kill his family just because.

now, I vote for the Harry Potter fanfiction

It was good while it lasted, but I don't like endings, that's why I read 1k chapter+ novels, I prefer to give up on a novel than it leaving me hanging, I like my way so much that I don't even read some completed novels.

****... would have liked a few more chapter :(

Just start a new novel where Jax got sent to another world after finishing HxH with one or some of the Hatsu he made and maybe the talent.

That’s it?

The story was quite good and it's fast pace kept one engaged. I wish you could have made something more of the dark continent as with the kind of power he already had the island was just too small for him. Anyways it was a good read though short