Comments of chapter undefined of Level Up Legacy

Is this gonna turn out to be another story of a mc with a sub human iq and eq? Then gradually raise his intelligence to an average person and call it character growth?

I think I'm stopping here. All the skipped, plot pivotal conversations (Jizo, Si, anything with the exam) make the story hard to follow. I checked a few times to see if I missed a chapter somehow. It has potential, but with these happening so early, I lack the investment to gloss over the missed opportunities to make us excited for anything coming after

not liking this chapter. i doubt like that he is just led around and trusts random people, but then not the government. why is a stranger better? i also don't like that we have emotional outbursts about an apparently missing dad. why should we care if it's not even important enough for you to explain?

These unexplained moments are weird. I think the writing is decent and has a lot of potential but it's like every section is a cliff hanger leaving a whole lot left unexplained. The flow is a bit choppy. Hope it improves in later chapters .

hmm. what with this father character coming when you least expect

I can't really vote here, i'm trying to stay first somewhere else, but you have my full support, great job

i see some of the comments talking about several issues, i would like to add something. MC is already special, then suddenly from somewhere, a Master Yoda type came out. As if isn't MC already special, become more special, i bet later on MC would come across several advantages too. Its so cliche, let mc grow. Picked up from arcana because he is special (!). How come? Because Si guy has special eyes. Special that, special this.

Author sure has some mega daddy issues

so mcs gonna be a dog under Si guy after the training and stuff and call it owing him??

I doubt that I would trust someone who could actually "see" my true character - since that is a variable that changes with life experience.

;P

I think he is just scared and terrified of his familyz well being dependent on him coming home like a cop or firefighter each day

Ok. Started good. But. What is this emotional baby mc…. Plot holes. Missing info. Yep done

that's it, I can't read it anymore 😔 . it definitely has potential and I don't know it is in later chapters but 😔

Ok I am going to stop reading here. The story has become too disjointed. More planning and consistency is needed.

thanks for the chapter

hope he is a fighter

awesome