CORNBRINGER
Ok I'm dropping this story, why are you even writing a story if you don't want to show us a story. You just tell us meaningless numbers of all powerful animals and the end result of how his house is powerful. We know literally nothing about Krakens, these Krakens could be as powerful as a flopping salmon, or each one could be a world eater. Somehow house Mormont now owns and controls 24 of them for some inane reason. With how little meaning and impact they have had so far on the story, I am questioning why you even included them.
You are exaggerating, too much, think a little, 4000 is a lot, probably the whole population of the island is not much bigger than that. You talk about how he makes money and how he kills spies, but you don't explain how the trade developed on the island, there's more population? 3 years is very little time, even with its advantages it's illogical for me, your story is good, but it can get better.