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the devil fruit is for Nami or Carina?if giving for Nami, I think that Awa Awa no Ni is the best choice.It'll grant nami ability to control soap and bubbles. And with Nami's understanding, she will develop a new model of weather art that different from the canon.Of course it'll different from climate tact because that weapon can produce three type of bubbles (heat, cool and electrical). And for fruit's case, I think it only possible to make hot and cold bubbles.
suggest, it'll become two chapter. 1. Sibling's Tragedy (Elfman x Mirajane) plot: Elfman blame himself because he's the reason that Lisanna is dead, so Mira will support Elfman and make him to move on by offering her body. 2. Sibling's Reunion. (Elfman x Mirajene & Lisanna) Lisanna is come back from Edolas and the siblings drinks together and so accident will be happen.
make scane about Reverie.Story, Charlos want to make Shirahoshi to become his slave. We remember that Rebecca and Vivi against it.About Dressrossa: Dofflamingo toying Viola and RebeccaSyrup Village: Kaya x Kuro, in front usoppEnies Loby:Spandam is toying Robin in Sea Train.Wano:Ace x YamatoZoro x HiyoriOrochi x Komurasaki (Hiyori)Orochi x RobinSo, make Charlos success to take Shirahoshi and he also will punish Rebecca and Vivi because they're oppose him by raping them in front the other.
how about make Saber to become Gilgamesh's servant. [this is can become a short series] After Gil become a real person because of holy grail, he will search Avalon. So, Shirou will die. Arthuria is still remember about 4th war and hated Gil. So he will dominate and force her to become his woman. they'll win war but Saber will become Alter corrupted by Angra Mianyu before it. Gil will use grail to summon Saber again and possess both of Saber and Alter.
it's good story especially if it keep be short series like this.but, I have suggest. How about make a little change:-like make the story with Saji as main with Sona and her peerages. -Vali chaos bridg's female member, you can change Arthur with Artoria [fate series].-Tobio from slash sog series.-Riser's view point, killing issei in his wedding and slaving Rias and her peerages. For Riser's story can include his sister (ravel) and his own peerages.-etc.
how about make series that Shinji as mMain Character, Story plot:1. Taking Sakura's virgin and enslave her since 3 years before canon.2. After Sakura summon Rider, he want to taste heroic spirit (Rider).3. Playing with Sakura and Rider4. Rin knows about what happen with her sister, she'll make a deal with Shinji.5. Shinji playing with Sakura and Rin.6. Saber is making contract with Rin in that time (like UBW) and Shinji'll steal Saber's command seal from Rin.7. Playing with his servants (Saber and Rider)8. Crazy party with all of them.
domain battle between Gojo and Sukuna (ch 226).Tsukumo vs Kenjaku (ch206).
because Naruto is already fast and don't he need learn about it.aldo, FTG is not suitable for someone who always use kage bunshin.let's image, Naruto create many clones. What will happen is 2 or more think to teleport in same point, instead be faster, it'll distrupt his movement especially every clones can think independentely.to use FTG, he also need to think the environment and prepare coordinate too. After teleport, it can make himself confuse if he is not planning 2-3 move ahead the enemy because his angle will be drasticly change.
simple domain also can do it.
yesand maybe make Yuji to awake Itadori Kaori's cursed technique (Antigravity System) after he eat Sukuna's finger.make Yuji's existence as vassel is be force by binding vow because of kenjaku's plan. That's way Yuji get extraordinary power but not stong as Toji. And the vow will be broken when he gain curse energy from Sukuna's finger.
wait, how about Long Yuyin instead. Or maybe Gu Lan.