CORNBRINGER
You are exaggerating, too much, think a little, 4000 is a lot, probably the whole population of the island is not much bigger than that. You talk about how he makes money and how he kills spies, but you don't explain how the trade developed on the island, there's more population? 3 years is very little time, even with its advantages it's illogical for me, your story is good, but it can get better.