Grand_Void_Daoist
I should know by now that comments are useless. I randomly check them just to see if someone has some insight on something I may have missed but itâs a bunch of âidiotâ spam. The real idiots are people that measure the MC from their own perspective. Heâs sixteen yes, but heâs literally a bottom of the barrel existence even among the other poor folk. Heâs as wary as he can be in his ignorance of the world. The only truly dumb choice is selling the box, knowing the pills came with it. For everything else though, he isnât a privileged reader from a first world country with mandated education, access to the internet and an omniscient third person perspective.
So I have no major critique of the novel as of yet it seems quite fine. The flow of the story seems reasonably paced and the characters seem real enough that they don't feel like 2-D cutouts that only serve a singular purpose in a story. I understand he is the main character but this absurd luck is strange in a sense but I have seen way worse so overall fine