Comments of chapter undefined of Rewrite! DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan

I hope he doesn't follow or work for Darkseid or the League of Shadows. He doesn't have to join the JL, but I hope he's more anti-hero than Hero or Villian and not evil. Since he has memories of Dc he should know who to attack on sight and who to trust, and any villain isn't someone to trust.

W chapter L for not using a mouth blast😭

from the pov of the people who were watching him Darkseid is dead or gone and he is supposed to replace him

neither a hero nor a villain, something in between, neither black or white, a gray with principles, something like deadpool, I haven't seen the comics but he is an anti-hero that when things go very wrong helps and does what the heroes can't, something like that would be good for the character.

After a daring escape from Cadmus will typhon’s desire for strength overwhelm him or will he become the being this world needs. Find out on the next exciting episode of DC: True saiyan.

I hate when authors create their MC in another race, but insist on wanting to keep the humanity of the MC.....And please, without mercy, kill all your enemies.

Why is he barely leaving the place and is he already fighting with the heroes? at this rate he will end up becoming a villain, I sincerely hope he doesn't

This is great keep up the great work can’t wait to see more will the mc be more anti-hero or anti-villain later on in the chapters

Thanks for the chapter

now that they mentioned apokolips, could it be that one of the adn they used is not human but darkseid adn or something similar? because if i read correctly, there is a adn that is not mentioned whose it is.

Great potential story. Personally it depends on the MC only now. Will he continue to have mental issues, self doubt, etc constantly? Or it will pass in a few chapters. For me its just about how long can a plot line get dragged before I give up. Is he a hero, no killing bs? Basically comics woke made by writers to recycle villains. Or more balanced, realistic? Not pure psychopath but can finish a fight if needed... or want. Anyway, really long chapters, a bit of grammar\typo at times but good start.

Obrigado pelo capítulo

si no mata seguro que abandone no vine a leer a un hipócrita y estúpido

First, I would propose that you raise funds to obtain a private island, which houses gigantic creatures so that you can hunt them and have a good supply of food, the other materials to build certain implements to train such as the gravity chamber/heavy clothing or with magical protections/in addition of magical items or unique metals; then build a giant fortress for your future harem

Kyptonians are weak against Ki or Life Force attack

He should learn mind magic to help put his mind in order and peace

The mcs origin feels almost exactly the same as in Mass Effect: Hybrid but more DC

Good Work

Keep going please 🤩