I have a question, was his body altered from his original body to toji's or was the body created from scratch? I don't know if you know what I mean, I ask because if it's the former in a sense the chemistry in his brain as well as toji's memory or instincts are there that's why he doesn't feel hesitation or am I thinking too much haha.

Will you continue it someday?

he can also tell a partial truth, that there are times when he sleeps he receives knowledge from other beings is not a lie plus it would allow him to be much freer to train his powers and batman gets a partner to train with and improve.

it would have been better if you showed the first meeting with every important villain, it feels like a waste not to do it. i like it a lot even though it's just starting so far the novel i'm most looking forward to reading.

now that you said all that I hope she has an encounter with the original gwen or a variant, it would be very very interesting.

they didn't suspect garaki? right after they left the hospital he is kidnapped and not only that but they also had information about his peculiarity, it makes you wonder where they got it from? in general the kidnapping scene is fine but not perfect the police should have investigated the sounds of gunshots but they were hidden for an hour without the police or a hero appearing, you should have specified the area where it happens for example it is unpopulated, no heroes are circulating, it is far away from people etc.

if you have time you could edit it, put in the title of the chapter that it was edited and give a little explanation in the next chapter.

I saw it in the original language, I hadn't thought about the dubbing.

what was the mc's appearance like? I forgot.

when sasuke was a child he called him nii-san not by his first name

this point is one where many readers don't fully understand, the body affects the mind whether it be thoughts or emotions all because of the chemistry that is produced in the brain as a child so it is normal for him to be reckless, for his thoughts to leak out to others either verbally or by changes he doesn't notice in his face, to be controlled by emotions and therefore show immature behavior no matter what mental age he has had unless he has had some training to control himself in his past life. I personally like a mix of both, showing his thoughts and his immature side as he changes throughout the novel, seeing a child being totally logical and controlled is boring.

in the future you could make an auxiliary chapter showing the information of the mc as well as his belongings (weapons, clothes, armor etc) as well as images of his appearance of the mc and his belongings? if possible only. so far i really like the novel, whenever there is a naruto fic they always give everything to make them op and go from fight to fight, this one i like a lot because of the rhythm, showing how is his life and the interactions with the others.

almost all the female members and some male members towards the end of shippuden, i think it was mentioned in some chapters that hinata had potential but she was too nice and shy, plus she is one of my favorite characters. i could choose rock lee or neji but i would like to see a female member who is described as a powerful person. (traslater)

Personally I liked it better when Tanya could detect when Anya was reading her mind, although this isn't bad either.

You used the information from the novel for the following sequences? it's already over 500 chapters long so there must be a lot of information that you didn't have before about this Pathways and Demoness Sect. welcome back and I wish you luck so that something like this doesn't happen again.

se agradecen las imagenes y muy buen capitulo!!

raven tiene que quedar con el, siempre fue mi personaje femenino favorito en dc, la historia me encanta, ya me gustaba la anterior y en esta se nota la mejora en el mc mas que nada, en el anterior simplemente fue con ellas sin mucha resistencia y era muy complaciente con ellas. espero mucho las interacciones con la liga y espero que no los termines retratando como unos idiotas, y por ultimo la forma en que corrompe es mejor que la anterior, realmente no me gusto que pasara a ser su mascota ahora esta mejor

me gusta mas este que el otro, en el otro era demasiado complaciente con las mujeres y un caliente que se perdia cada vez que veía a una mujer ademas de que las relaciones en el otro estaban muy apresuradas, espero que haya un desarrollo en esta reescritura

the first version I loved it until you introduced the justice league and I gave up on it really they always make them look bad in fanfic they never show their good sides and that's annoying, as for the hypocrisy that's more the writers fault because if the league did their job right they would have to create new villains all the time so they use the jailbreak card all the time and I think there's politics in between? the league more or less sticks to the laws of the land so they can't do much when they catch the villains i don't know if this is so since i don't see the comics but it can be used as an excuse for the jailbreak problem. as for the alliances well they can't just eliminate them after they introduce them it would be a waste so they make them become good or neutral to use them from time to time in their stories.

are you going to continue your other stories like oni and scp's? i liked them a lot but i don't know if they are on pause or you abandoned them.