Comments of chapter undefined of Rewrite! DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan
Rewrite! DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan
Demon_King22
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How can you make someone with Saiyan-doomsday power and Dna a pacifist and a loser with human emotions ? With that much power, he's just trash. He's a combination of two Op bodies and you still make him a nice guy. You know he doesn't need to be grateful to those girls, right? With his own power, let alone their pathetic power, he could take down the research center in seconds. I think it's bad for this story that you gave him past human memories from the earth, very bad. You could have done it like your Tdg fiction and things would have gone much more naturally and well. It would have been original in the reactions, but now he will always hold herself back because of those 'precious' memories.
Well, I'll wait for a rage scene, but even then, it will be a big disappointment if he can't show his powers properly. Because for both Saiyan and Doomsday sides reach their potential, he have to fight. And as for the romance part... I don't know, it feels, it will be forced here. I'll wait and see. I'm fine as long as it doesn't ruin the story...
Demon_King22:I can understand your disappointment on this point, but I didn't want to create a psychopathic mc who kills for no reason when there are smarter possibilities to follow, besides I think it would have been very boring. Anyway to clarify the mc is neither a pacifist nor a good and only guy just very scared of his new power which is totally compressible with the various DNAs inside his body " Saiyan - Doomsday - ███" We just have to wait for the world to teach Mc that he does not have the luxury of being able to hold back, to release all his emotions held in check, and to learn to savor battle, conquest, and victory in order to call himself complete.
Why would anyone write a story with such a pathetic mc? He's so worthless and scared that he's even too puss to take off a straitjacket? So stupid. He's so afraid that he'll get mad and kill someone without meaning to, but if he does, what's the jacket going to do anyways? He'd just bust out of it then..
I hope the MC is an Antagonist and villain, don't make the MC a hero and join the justice league or something like that, we don't want the mc being anyone's subordinate/servant/slave. Completely disappointing and pathetic this MC's personality and attitude, it doesn't make any sense for someone who has the memories of a Saiyan and Doomsday to be a coward and fearful. I'm almost dropping.
I don't know if you were high when you went to write this story doomsday could maybe defeat Farma avatar of darkseid not his true form which is basically an entity, second place stop smoking crack, there's no way he's the strongest character in the universe just with this DNA, flash and doctor Manhattan are examples of beings that he cannot defeat, he may be the strongest in his fictional universe and for that he will have to exclude a good part of the DC universe to function or use the author's power and say no explanation or logic that he is the strongest.
