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Comments of chapter undefined of The Mage of Primordial Chaos

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baillout
bailloutLv2baillout

Thanks for the chapter

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DaoistgHqfSX
DaoistgHqfSXLv1DaoistgHqfSX

mori jin and his gramps frowning on how martial arts wouldnt help against magic

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akirakunz
akirakunzLv4akirakunz

One thing i don't understand how could he run away from 8 assassins ? They just had to let one of them run after him and kill him. But other than that it's pretty good ^^

Worn_out_by
Worn_out_byLv15Worn_out_by

So many things wrong with the assassins but mainly most of them got answered but telling your target who gave you the job is dumb and makes no sense to me

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TyrantDeity
TyrantDeityLv12TyrantDeity

Everything was good, but mizu shield part was cringe i must say. They are chinese but using japanese words. I think if you use english words for spell names, it would be more professional writing. Other than this, the story is very good. Go on author. :)

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HHZauberer
HHZaubererLv12HHZauberer

mmhm , i am reading... slow start ?

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Worn_out_by
Worn_out_byLv15Worn_out_by

Also if the cover is what the MC is supposed to look like then jeez is he a edge lord later in life 🤣

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slothly_bear
slothly_bearLv13slothly_bear

This is way to good.

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ChillasACube
ChillasACubeLv1ChillasACube

Nice to know more backstory about his life, and feelings. Very well written and im glad that effort was put into the story. Very strange that it had already revealed who was the one that ordered the assassins.

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Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thx for the chap

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Dream_Seeker_729
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Aim_zx
Aim_zxLv13Aim_zx

Hmm is The Stone That Have The Chaos Element or the MC Have it Before and The Stone Just Help The Awakening ??

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Mirodin
MirodinLv12Mirodin

I think that saying "sounds of explosions and thunder" would be better than BOOM.ZAP.CRASH. Really brought me out of the story.

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SageDaoist4
SageDaoist4Lv3SageDaoist4

I'm I'm Crying 😭😭😭😭...no plzz my weak heart...

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PhantomNite629
PhantomNite629Lv15PhantomNite629

thx for the chap

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ArtemyxEris
ArtemyxErisLv1ArtemyxEris

Nobody: Literally nobody: Antagonists in manhua before a fight: KILL!!!

Darium_saladin
Darium_saladinLv4Darium_saladin

To everyone pointing the how stupid is the entire novel. IS A FREAKING MANHUA WHAT DID YOU ESPECTED ASIDE FROM TRASH.

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Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

THX

Man_of_culture_69
Man_of_culture_69Lv2Man_of_culture_69

Well stupid chapter of dead people

eloheitzvaot
eloheitzvaotLv13eloheitzvaot

Thanks