Nice to know more backstory about his life, and feelings. Very well written and im glad that effort was put into the story. Very strange that it had already revealed who was the one that ordered the assassins.

Interesting, wish that the names were more simple and im glad you clarified what the name meant. Otherwise, well written and im already thinking about how the story will progress so its very exciting to keep reading and finding out more

I enjoy how this was written as well as the work that went into what and how the world was working. Wish more work would have been put into the monologue of Xuan Kai, to make it seem more natural than aspiring main character. Although I will keep reading more of it and giving out more of my thoughts. Well done.